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Sparks

Sparks

When two hearts depend on one
Beating in intervals
The child feels
Its entire being rush and decelerate in this harmony
Until born a parent to one beat

Orange and red shelter
Give way to a black sky

Only to be gazed upon



When sparks lose color the night-
-Falls into place.
Interspaced with stars as nameless as we
Connections unseen
Cloaking tragedies in each unearned line

Watching for fireworks  
Knowing that fire doesn’t work alone
The waterworks flow
To extinguish awareness

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Written May 12th, 2006

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  • Ramona Wright
    May 12, 2006
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    Love....lust....i love it all. Very good write. Keep it up! I really liek this peom. I love the meafores you used. Very unique. I love it all. Great. amazing.

    <3

    Ramona