You were once my voice of reason
But not anymore
You have changed completely
And won't ever be like before
You've hurt me so much
More than you'll ever know
The scars won't ever heal
And the pain doesn't alwayz show
When you finally come back
I won't be here
I can't handle all this anymore
I'm tired of all these tears
Because even after how far we've come
You let it all go in a blink of an eye
I've done all I can do
Except say my final good-bye
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Written May 12th, 2006
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Awesome beautiful. Leaving and never coming back. Sometimes people believe saying goodbye isn't enough. Some times its true, and sometimes it not. I can relate though. I've had some friends that have betrayed me, and I can say is good bye. But sometimes thats all you want in the end.
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Wow... Great write cyndi Thats some deep shyt! i guess i could say it hit home... You've always had a good way with words... I hope that might take you somewhere one day... You know I think you should write an autobiography It would make a very interesting story.
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Hey Cyndi! Sorry i havnt been on ur site lately. i havnt really been on my lately either. i like this poem. it kinda relates to me. well it did. but this poem is deep. i think i saw you at school b4 ur last day. well hopefully we talk again soon. -
If only it was that easy to say a final good bye. The only thing is that it does not get rid of the pain. You carrie it with u for as long as u remember him. There is no way to remember a person and forget the pain that they caused. And there are only so many tears that u can shead before the reason that U shead them changes. So is there really a final goodbye, Because in the back of your mind u will always remember them. And on those night that u are truly alone, the pain that they caused will be your companion. Anyways great write. See U later. Bye Byes
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ur awesome
hey em, awesome write..it was great. it seemed very personal and real....u really expressed what u felt and that was great...well..i guess.. i will ttyl..alright? buh bye and keep on writing this awesome ass poetry....
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Yo home dawgizzel...lol...just kiddin...this is really good...so heart felt...and even though it doesn't apply right now it is still really good...Your poems never seem to stop amazing me...don't let them start! I mean i! Don't try me! Lol...ok, I'll stop being and idiot for five min. and be just a little serious...oh God!!! Ok ok I swear it will start now. This is so great...it could be the lyrics to a song...can I borrow this? I might need to tell some people how I feel about them. Crap! I can't go five min! Oh well you knew this when we became friends...lol!
Gonna talk to you later I'm sure,
Rachael
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