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Sensitivity

the scars you've created
are taking over
my mind, body, and soul
the lies you've fed me
are becoming truths
I'll never be loved
I'll never be anything
I'm a whore
and a bitch
and a slave
for you
you use me and abuse me
say my name in vain
torture me until I'm dead
my mind, body, and soul
scream at me until
I hear your words
when you are right
and I am wrong
I'm ugly and unwanted
yet wanted by you
needed by you
I give you nothing
in the form of
security, comfort, and control
I know you love me
when you lie
I know you hate me
when I cry
if I lie it's over
and if I die
it's closure
I believe you when you tell me
I'm great
your world, your hell
your life and death
you secure me
with your pain
and envy me
with your lies
you release me with your hands
my mind, body, and soul

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Written September 11th, 2002

A contest entry

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  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    Interestingly dark piece here. It was strange to me at first, for some lines felt out of place, but overall, great write. Excellent job and good luck in my contest.

  • starving-to-survive
    January 7

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    wow!!!!! that is amazing. Your words captured me so well. Each word made me feel more and more. the anger, hurt, frustration and need comes across so well. Thank you for entering into my contest i am truly honored


  • Procrastination
    July 18, 2007

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    This is very dark, very intense, sort of a slap back to reality after reading all those Lovey Dovey poems!
    Goodluck in the contest!
    Much love,
    Emily xxx


  • Memoirs of a Girl
    July 17, 2007
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    Wow. Very intense. Great write and thank you for entering!
    ~Memoirs