You asked me what I cherish the most
I cherish the memories of two years past
The memories of a journey
I cherish the memories of an angel
Who you took away from me
I cherish the laughter
I shared with my friends
I cherish the love of the children
Who live beside me
I lost all the tears to be cried by my eyes
Because you took away so much
I cherished my mother
She looked after me
I cherished the angel
Her heart was what kept me strong
You want to know what I cherish the most?
I cherish the fact
That I am about to get my revenge on YOU
So stay away from my friends and me
Stay where you belong
In my memory
Author notes
Tell me what you think of this. Ok this is about advent children mainly, remember sephiroths qoute "Tell me what you cherish most" Well, here is what I believe is going through Clouds mind at this time. This is about Cloud, so its a character centric. Hope you like this 
Written May 12th, 2006
What did you think
Comments
1 - 12 of 12
-
Hi hunny <3, long time no speak. I dont get much time to come on here anymore
but I come on as often as I can. I'm glad you enjoyed it 
It was nice hearing from you babe <3
Love mummy <333 -
hi mommy =]
i haven't really been around here in awhile so I decided to comment here... I really like this poem. I like how it switches from kind of sweet and solemn to really angry... and yeah, I just like it a lot. -
lol is it that obvious that its final fantasy ?? Cool . I'm glad you like it
-
WONDERFUL!
I like it for it says to be strong and to not let others get the best of me, wonderful poem my friend.
-
thanks . I dont tend to write many poems based on cloud, theyre mainly sephiroth. Gool luck with the contest
-
aww thanks . It was inspired by a poem I read in another contest, funnily enough, the other contest im in at the moment.
-
^_^; I figured this was something to do with final fantasy or advent children as soon as I read the title. I really like these poems of yours, they express exactly what the characters do not say, yet we can sometimes tell that they're thinking just that thing.
Good luck in the contest~
~Aizou -
lo this is funny this contest coming up, i just got KH2, you did a great job on this poem, i love what you did here, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
-
Wow the opposite of one of the poems I wrote, but I have to say it is a well written opposite and I absolutely adoe it. Well done and good luck in the contest.
-
Awesome poem, I knew where this was going, but it was well written. Tou understand tis poem you have to have played the game, and I know you have. This should definetly win, well goodluck.
-
Aww thankyou
-
yikes that was good. the ending was kind of shocking instead of what u said i thought u were going to say what i cherish most of all is u. but u turned it around great write check mine out sometime. if you get the chance love keisha
Adding your comment:
1 - 12 of 12
3 old applause
