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Mirage?

 

Infested garden
Walking barefoot as if thorns were an anointing
A blessed reminder of better, more pastoral times,
And not the drought of loving speech and warm embraces

Calm but not collected
In the hot winds of denial, betrayal, ignorance
Counting the hours she has been away
I am become a lizard that finds no shade

No matter;
Regret is her province
Her domain, the only thing over which she has complete control
And I am free

But not from the thirst,
The quaking need of her signature scent to drink
The paradisiacal oasis
Promised in her smooth arms and silken hair

Rusted, bullet-ridden canteens
Grow like weeds
But not as virulently... no, not nearly as virulently
As the mercy I should grant,
Could grant, will grant...

To one who speaks truth when she says she loves me.

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Written May 12th, 2006

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  • Eulb kcalB
    July 31, 2007
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    wow


  • Andy Stephenson
    October 24, 2006
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    It seems in this poem that you were disappointed again by your last woman and ever hoping the next one may be the right one. I hope you have that right one now.

    Andy


  • June 5, 2006
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    This is a great poem, I enjoyed the first stanza the most, the image was protruding in my head with the words you used! A great write, I look forward to reading more. Tink

  • Ankeeta silver member
    May 29, 2006
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    uhmm liked it
    Ankita


  • Catressa gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    Your latest works really touch me Gio


  • Ambivalence .
    May 12, 2006
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    Amazing poem. I especially liked the lines...

    " Regret is her province
    Her domain, the only thing over which she has complete control
    And I am free ".

    Great imagery. I can feel the pulsating emotions like a desert heat wave. (And I like the title of the Collection this is in too.. I need one of those.) Keep writing..

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