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One too many

I'm riding a horse
Doing brain surgery
With a wrench
On the head of an Ant
To open the door
Uncordinated hand
One too many rums and cokes.

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What is it like to open a door when, no matter how hard you try, the lock isn't big enough, the key's too small, and you know tomorrow will begin with the biggest of hangovers
Written May 12th, 2006

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  • Candy-912
    May 16, 2006
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    i like this poem its so cute and its funny cause when drink sometimes i feel the same way (lol)


  • darkestcorners
    May 12, 2006
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    good poem. Make sure you read EVERYTHING though. Good luck in the contest!