how could you do this to me
i loved you so fucking much
yet you ripped my heart
into a million fucking pieces
i must be fucking retarded
to think that there was-
something between us
there never was...
was there?
im just a naive little girl
who wanted to love
someone from a different world
what did i do to deserve
this torture of love
all i did
was screw myself the fuck over
well you know what
fuck love
fuck life
i dont need it anymore
and fuck you most of all
you didnt even try
you fucking bitch
i hate you so fucking much
but that is only a dream
i wish i could hate you
but i cant- why
are you doing this to me
stuck in my head
are thoughts of you
i cannot lose them
i cannot move on
no matter how much i try
i didnt want to end up like this
alone and crying on the floor
screaming my heart out
over love that was not meant to be
well fuck it
i dont care anymore
you fucking bitch
you broke my heart
of fucking well
its not like anyone gives a fuck anyways
Author notes
this is like one of my favorite poems and yes i know i cussed way to much in this poem but sorry for the extreme vulgarness
Written May 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- love hurts by loveaswellashate.
300 points, ended August 20, 2006, 19 entries
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You did kinda cuss alot, some of it was used tastefully...some of it not so tastefully, but it's ok. Sometimes it just hapens to work out that way when you're angry. But you definitely got your point across, and that's what 's important. Thank you for your entry, and good luck.
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you were oviously very angrey when you wrote this, or just exspressing exstream anger, so its okay... i like saying fuck so i dont mind some people might though, nice poem though, i usually dont like non rhymeing poems there hard for me to follow but this is good...
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haha... i love this poem.. fuck is my fav word and you used it well in this poem... you put alot of emoiton in it.. great job and good luck in my contest...
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Wow...alot of anger got spilt over this poem, I get the same way when I am angry, curse alot, its a tad uncontrolable in a situation. I can see let alone feel how much pain you have/had (don't know time span sorry, too lazy to go up the page, lol). I felt the same, I pleaded to hate but only ended up hating to love. Well done, a good forceful poem. Good luck in the contest.
Be safe
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yes i know i use the "F" word alot especially in this poem but i wrote it when i was mad and when i get mad i dont think straight and i end up cussing alot...but that issue set aside im glad you liked it
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heart breaking
There are words besides "F" words, a few are effective but there is dictionary filled with good epitaphs to throw.
Now, to the poem. This is the most hatred I have sensed in a long time. However it is love coated with hatred. This is something you have not let go of and it's eating you up inside.
You wrote this well. I pray some resolution will come for you.
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Wow... the f** word is used many times here, but it fits in well, so I won't touch on that. I can feel your pain here.... This is well written.
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good
I can really feel the pain you feel good job.
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