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Please, Believe In Me

My life I would gladly give for you,
My love for you is endless,
Sweetly I long for your touch,
Your caress, that sets my skin on fire,
Embrace life with me and feel the
Warmth melt the coldness of isolation,
Let my kiss ignite your passion,
Let your life be exquisite in it's completeness,
Let me teach you how to trust,
To love and to live,
Believe in me, believe in yourself

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Written May 12th, 2006

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  • its a very pretty poem! I enjoyed it!


  • Fianna Black
    January 7
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    Beautiful write.
    Very simple, but a lovely work indeed.

    Best of luck in the contest!


  • LittleDecoy
    July 22, 2006
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    tihs wuz sooo pretty!! i loved it!! great write all over! i love how u put "let my kiss ignite your passion"... i love that line. i think its wonderful! great job n good luck in my contest! thanx 4 entering!
    xoxo rachel

  • FindingFate
    May 12, 2006
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    This is very good...thank you for entering this contest...Trina.