He’s a cold, dry soul
A heart that’s harder than stone
He has eyes to drop a heart
And lies to break a name
He’s a bowl full of laughs
But it’s all just a trick
He’s a smooth criminal
And a deadly kiss
His eyes are full of light
But I think the dark is just well hidden
He’s a put together piece of life
But he looks a little lost
His eyes are open
But he has no idea what he’s seeing
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Written May 12th, 2006
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YAY claire bear! you're such a great poet
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Good, strong write. Very descriptive will a nice flow. You are a growing writer. Keep up the good work.
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Another good one!
Well, really like the word choices and descriptions here. Somehow I think you're getting older day by day and the writing shows it. Not quite the little softball player any more. Good job, Claire. Just keeps getting better.
Paul -
Claire I love you. how do you write poems so good?
this is shay I LOVE YOU! kay now that shays done. lol hmm yeah. okay i love you <3 -
I like this one alot. I think every girl has had, or will have an ex-boyfriend like this...or people who are really good at it (telling what people are like) can sense it in strangers. Which I think is what the title sort of gives away. I like this alot, it's one of those Cofee House Poetry types, I haven't read in a while.
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So you met my ex husband!lol Nice work
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interestin' write...! a stranger who seems a differnt way on the outside but is lost and vulnerable on the inside... nice style of writin and nice concept... good write!
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