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What Happens To Them

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I often seek wild and natural places
Where I feel more awake and alive. 
Life seems more precious somehow 
When I’m just struggling to survive.


When warding off the cold at night
Or avoiding predators during the day,
I feel my ancient ancestors watching
Who lived their daily lives that way.


There’s a graceful communion in nature;
All the different life forms in a dance.
The simultaneous conflict and harmony
Of animals, insects, birds and plants.


If I can slow my mind and sit quietly
And become a part of that harmony
I can feel my place in the universe.
I’m a part of it and it’s part of me.


But I always must return again to the city
Where we humans work our lives away
As the wheel of progress crushes us 
So we can create more bills to pay.


I always try to reconcile the human world
With the one that humans have left behind -
The natural world that is now being assaulted 
For the material demands of the human mind.


And I wonder how long it can last –
All this progress for its own sake.
How much more can the earth give?
How much more abuse can it take?


It's our only home so we should protect it 
But somehow, it rarely works out that way,
And all the damage we're doing to her now 
Will be a terrible debt our children must pay.


I arrive home exhausted when the day is done.
Sticky tar and cement have no energy to give.
My little dog comes running over to greet me 
Bursting with happiness just to play and live.


And I envy her natural joy and enthusiasm
For mine is so tainted by worries and doubt.
Yes, her mind is simple, so unlike my own,
But it makes me wonder what life is about.


Is there a better way to live and use this earth?
If there is, how will any one of us ever learn it?
Our societies, like us, are so set in their ways
And change never happens unless we earn it.


In the evening, my dog falls asleep at my feet.
I watch a doggy dream rolling across her face.
And I think of all the creatures out in the wild
And how long they’ll survive the human race.


Humans and animals are drifting alone in space
Together and apart on this tiny, delicate ball.
I don't know everything, but I do know this -  
What happens to them will happen to us all.


























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Written May 12th, 2006

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  • AusStar gold member
    June 24

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    Oh my Gosh Mark!! Did you know that the photo of the giraffes was taken at the Perth Zoo, the place I have spent so many many hours experiencing what you have written about here!

    When Sam & Beth were 3 & 1 I used to go once a week and just wander around immersing myself in the nature and the scent of the animals, getting lost in the tropical garden walk and just living in the moment, something that I have lost and desperately want back! My Mum would come with me every other week and we just wandered around enjoying every second. It was the most perfect time in my life.

    I think maybe I might stop reading your poetry now.


  • DragonBlue silver member
    September 14, 2007

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    I loved your presentation, and your words ring true as you take our perdicment personally, as we all should. That I beleive is the only way to change what is happening to our planet. Your pen is very emotional and that emotion rings true in every word. Thank you for entering my contest.

    Write on!
    )O(
    DragonBlue


  • Grieving-Willow
    May 27, 2006
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    I see you won gold for this one and rightfully so. This is one of the most passionate writes I have read from you, and I too along with others, appauld it. This is one of my many favorites from you, and it is very well written.

    Breaktaking photos... I'm speechless.

    Love you

    Sara

  • Maureen silver member
    May 15, 2006
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    Excellent!

    I applaud your poem, Mark. Thank you for writing it! Your concern for animals is the same as mine..I worry so much about them! I pray that animals (and humans) will be okay (but it doesn't look that way). We need to think of ways to make a healthier environment and to protect the polar bears and seals that are running out of ice due to global warming. You mentioned people who toss cigarette butts out of their car windows in your last comment. I just told my husband last night that is one of my pet peeves..people who litter the world with cigarette butts, etc. with no regard for others (and, ultimately, for themselves).

    Wake up, America! It may already be too late. Please look into alternative fuel sources (ethanol, biodiesel fuel, etc.). We can't take anything for granted anymore. The time for action is NOW! This is the only world we've got!

    Congratulations on winning the gold, Mark. You deserved it!

    ♥ Maureen


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    Variable Dusk,

    Human beings are fascinating creatures, but most of their ways seem to be in conflict with nature, that's for sure. I don't over-romanticize nature because animals in the wild have pretty stressful lives, except for animals that have no natural predators like grizzly bears, wolves, lions, etc. But for most, it's always a struggle to survive. I just wish humans could be more in tune with nature and respectful toward it. I constantly see people throwing cigarette butts out of their car windows, which end up in the ocean, of course, dumping trash into storm drains, littering the beaches, etc., and it drives me nuts. Not to mention all the pollution created by our dependency on oil. There are plenty of viable alternatives that aren't being explored or developed because the lobbyists for those industries aren't strong enough to break the stranglehold of Big Oil. Hopefully, the ridiculous gas prices will hasten what is eventually going to have to happen anyway. I heard an interview with the head of Exxon recently. The reporter asked him if he would be willing to lower prices and make a few hundred million less for the sake of the economy and the middle or lower income people who are suffering greatly because of gas prices. He said, "No, I wouldn't. My only obligation is to our shareholders. They expect to see a return on their investment, and it's my job to get them as much as possible." In other words, F.U. America. These greedy a-holes need to be stopped.

    Anyway, sorry about the rant. Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    Mark

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    Hi Billy,

    Yes, you did. It must be on the other page. Thanks! It's always nice to meet a fellow nature lover.

    Mark

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    Good point. Man's perceived dominion is an illusion. We're like fleas on a big dog. One shake and we're finished. AIDS, SARS, famines, tsunamis, hurricanes, etc., may just be the earth striking back, trying to restore the balance we have disrupted.

    I heard a theory yesterday that if we built a 100 mile x 100 mile bank of solar panels in the middle of the Mojave desert, we could power the entire country and cut 90% of our oil use and pollution. I hope that happens soon. My next car is going to be a hybrid, for sure. Things have to start changing or that dog's gonna shake us off.

    Thanks,

    Mark

  • Billythekid
    May 12, 2006
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    I thought that I had already posted a comment on this.I know that I've read this great master piece.Anyways I too seek solice in nature.It tends to erase all the negative effects of our throw away society.
    -Billy the Kid-

  • dragonstuff83
    May 12, 2006
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    Great poem Mark...

    It is interesting to think that we have control over nature. But in reality, nature always seeks a balance.

    Simple, yet heard.

    Dragon

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    I love pufferfish! Their faces are so human because their eyes both face forward so they look right at you like people do. I always expect them to start talking. lol

    Thanks,

    Mark

  • davidjmartin gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    The rhyme, flow and imagery were great, but the message... fantastic. You've really put your point across. I especially liked:

    And I envy her natural joy and enthusiasm
    For mine is so tainted by worries and doubt.
    Yes, her mind is simple, so unlike my own
    But it makes me wonder what life is about.

    And we should wonder! It makes me think: 'are we the most intelligent lifeform?' Yes, we've invented all sorts of new-fangled contraptions, but is that what 'life' is about? To me, the animals certainly have a better perspective... a very thought inspiring piece Mark, well-written... well done.

  • JessTheRentyMess
    May 12, 2006
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    this is really good. i really enjoyed reading this. i like the picture of the pufferfish.

    good work,

    beachgurl22

  • nichtmich silver member
    May 12, 2006
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    24KT Poem

    Mark, this is simply beautiful. Of course, I like the rhyme and word flow, it's the imagery, the message that takes my breath away. (also like the way you put some of the words in bold, really effective ) I can see you've put a lot of thought into this (whether while writing the poem or long before) and it is polished go a golden shine Best wishes in the contest.

  • NoWayJo
    May 12, 2006
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    you add the most amazing graphics to your poetry, Mark that only adds to the impact of the writing. you've accomplished by poetry what cannot be spoken in political terms of the environment, of nature and the need as human to co-exist with the earth as it was intended. beautiful and poignant to every last detail, every last word.

    Jo

  • Night Hope gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    "I arrive home exhausted when the day is done.
    Sticky tar and cement have no energy to give.
    My little dog comes running over to greet me
    Bursting with happiness just to play and live.

    And I envy her natural joy and enthusiasm
    For mine is so tainted by worries and doubt.
    Yes, her mind is simple, so unlike my own
    But it makes me wonder what life is about."

    Ahhh, this is pensive & lovely, Mark...but ya answered your own question, Sweetie: "But it makes me wonder what life is about." ~ It's this, right here..."My little dog comes running over to greet me Bursting with happiness just to play and live." We could learn much from the animal kingdom, if we'd only follow their lead...Beautiful penning, Scribe...I'm pleased you used the pictures you did, my Friend...They fit this penning well...Good luck in the contest, Mark...Love ya, my Friend... Wanda

  • real irish rose
    May 12, 2006
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    Straight away I applaud you a dozen times if I could....that was the most powerful and beautiful write that I have ever read !!!!
    Well written and indeed a pleasure to read and also I loved the pictures xxx

  • lyrical-rebel
    May 12, 2006
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    such a nice and thoughtful write!... great message and very well conveyed!... loved the pictures you've added.. really makes one appreciate the beauty around.. good job and best of luck for the contest!

  • Eyes Of Rain
    May 12, 2006
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    AWESOME!!!!

    Mark this is a very deep and comptemplative piece that brings about many issues in todays world, issues that I totally agree upon with you. This is a very well-written and powerful piece.
    I love the pics, especially the Lion at the end.
    But your words really ring true and hit home.
    I feel that you couldn't be more right than you were in the last stanza...what happened to them will happen to all of us eventually. If only everyone cared more about their home (The Earth), and not just their own house and their own belongings. Each thinking it's not their job to make changes.
    Very nice work.
    Excellent.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Smoosh
    ~Sherry~

    P.S. IF you get time you might like to check out my poems 'Living on the Edge', and 'Life', I think you'd find them quite agreeable to your thinking.

  • xlovesconsx
    May 12, 2006
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    gorgeous words and pics
    it makes me think more about the topic you chosed

  • Billythekid
    May 12, 2006
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    That was incredible. I too seek solice in Nature. It brings a certain peace, as you say. I think if more people did this they wouldn't be so pissed at eveythyng.
    -Billy the Kid-
  • xA Beautiful Tear
    May 12, 2006
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    wow this was like really really good i loved it thanks!

  • Claireabelle-
    May 12, 2006
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    WOAH!!! THAT WAS GOOD! I liked all of the pictures. They fit well with the poem. I loveeed it. good job!!
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