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Somethings Happening

Somethings Happening
And There's Nothing
We Can Do About It
Our Heads Are Spinning
The Questions Go Unanswered
Your Post To Be Here
But Your So Far Away
The Tears Keep Falling
As the Pain Gets Deeper
Tell Me This Isn't True
Let Me Walk Out The Door
And See You Standing There
Show Me That My Mind Is Lieing
Somethings Meant To Be
Help Me
Show Me
Just Love Me

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Iam So Lost
Written May 12th, 2006

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  • iamfromabove
    May 9, 2007

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    hello she sounds like she just might be. I oved this you can feel the anticpation, confusion and the love within this
    Mia


  • Am8ur
    March 1, 2007

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    i noticed that you were on my favourites list, i have not really been on here (allpoetry) since early last year so i thought i would come and check you out lol. i wanted to refresh my memory i am so glad i did because this is a really beautiful piece. it is very well written.
    keep on writing love
    Til


  • My Starless Sky--X
    November 20, 2006
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    I noticed that you had seen my poem...well, just thought I'd stop by and say hi. You did a lovely job on this poem, plx keep it up! Yea you!

  • RandomPoetGirl
    September 8, 2006
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    It made me cry! Good job,

    Belva Jo
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