I had a dream of our souls
flying to unite with each
other.
We soared so high into the
sky, that we two became
one instantly.
I had a dream of our souls
uniting under the Sun.
And...
The moon confirmed this unity
will last forever.
Last Night I dreamt of you
and I together.
Last Night I had a Beautiful dream
that will last forever.
Yvonne J. Griffin
03/10/03
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This is dedicated to my Jeremy. One day we will become one under the sun. :-)
Written March 10th, 2003
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aww this is beautifully touching and captures the heart of all romantics!!!
what a lovely sentiment!!! I love the thought of two kindred souls entwining into eternity...such a heart warming write Yvonne!!
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Ah Yvonne
Tis beautiful!!
I had a dream of our souls
uniting under the Sun.
And...
The moon confirmed this unity
will last forever.
I really love that up there above but I really loved this whole thing
Beautiful Yvonne your voice is always so confident but you manage to write such soft images...what a wonderful combination
~~Dawn
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6.5/10
A lovely piece that you have written here, I think you could do more with it, but, it is fine the way that it is.
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don\'t touch it, awesome poem
WOW!m This is short but so beautiful. It took me on that mental trip your dream created. That's the way, I feel about my soulmate. Terrific write. The pink and floral presentation really set it off. I hope Jeremy realizes he is lucky to be so cherished. Thanks 4 sharing and keep writing. Very talented, like your topics and style. God Bless
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