Let me go you filth
I don't want your immortal flesh
Touching my skin
Your hands are cold, making me shiver
Realizing what you want
My eyes widen in fear
Adreniline forces my heart to quicken
Don't get the wrong idea
Some uncontrolable force
Rolling my head back over your shoulder
You want to tear through my neck
Killing me, draining me dry
I HATE YOU
You stupid immortal vampire
Try to escape your grasp
Kick and punch
Nothing does the damage
Why are you calling me Princess?
Am I some saint to you?
Your black hand grabs my throat
Brace for the impact of a lifetime
Close my eyes hoping to awaken
From the crimson nightmare
I begin to see the blackness
Thank you Death
From sparing me from immortality
Something running down my throat
NO!
Get it out of me!
Light begins to flicker
You filthy vampire!
Eyes stinging and body shaking
Ask me a question, I never wanted to hear
I will never kill MY kind
It is you, vampire, who will be my first
Author notes
In the humans perspective of Taken.
Don't get it, read the vampires POV.
Thanks
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Written May 12th, 2006
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Loved this one. Its an interesting change...hearing from the victims point of view. i love it!!! wonderful write!
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hee, this is a perfect match with the vampires POV, and it add depth! nicely done!
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Yet another great one lol where do they come from lol, great job.
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Sexyfide!
Oooo i like this one. But i dont think vampires are filty >.> They kinda cool! But i really really like you. You got some talent. Im jellous! -
Ooooo i definatly LOVE<3 this one, the feeling of being helpless and under control completly dosile and argh cant explain it!
i love your poems! they rule!
love ya my nawty sexy princess
lol
sophie
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Ahh, I definitely think that you got this one right. I have to say if I were taken against my will I would not want to do things associated with what I had been made into. Especially not killing my kind. I think that you captured the esscence of the victim quite well. Congrats!
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