heavenly angel with thy fragrant breath, do blow.
let these feathers in your hand, hit earth as white snow.
Author notes
something i've never seen in my life, but would love to see - snow. 
Written May 12th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Two lines of brilliance # 6 by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended May 12, 2006, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hey baby,this is kool
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This had a magical quality to it-a serendipty feel. I enjoyed reading this and wish you the best in the contest.~ vj
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This was really great...I loved how you turned the feathers into snow! I'll never look at another snowflake again without remembering this poem. Beautiful! Best of luck to you in the contest! God bless! Noble1
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Such beautiful imagery encased within your words. thanks for this entry... x LB
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