If I had but one smile to give,
I'd give it right to you,
But I have so many,
so gladly take a few
Smile a smile and laugh a laugh,
and I'll do them both with you
And we can have a good time
as I look into your eyes,so true
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FOr all the ladies out there that have so much passion, Never let it go. Don't let some one take it away, Stay true to you heart.
Written May 12th, 2006
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o my truly a tocuhing peom ty for sharing
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WONDERFUL POEM
Ah, Truly written from your heart. It was such a pleasure to read this morning. Everyone can use a smile and I appreciated it this morning. I hope you get many sent your way over there.
You are in my prayers. Thank you for the nice comment on my poem. Take care and God Bless, Sandy
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awww sweet. i like the first stanza its nice.
well written piece right here. made me smile -
Your poem is so pretty-it made me smile gracias
-'If I had but one smile to give,I'd give it right to you,'-right from the opening lines the mood of ultimate romance is set in-the rest of the poem follows smoothly very much in tune -'Smile a smile and laugh a laugh,and I'll do them both with you'-this sounds almost like a song- Eight lines and you have crafted a most melodious piece here -Bonita!
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wow that was really good. I loved it. so romantic. keep writing and always share your poetryfriend Maryann22
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