These Tears I Weep
You watched me
Fail to turn water into wine
While my benediction said
I was the one who could walk on water
Years pass away
As tears fail to fall
To walk among
Anyone who looked for more
More than what was real
The notion of God's
Your things unreal
We were lost
In the clouds of trouble
Back straightway to my beloved
Derides what we seen by the Heavens serene
Were the things told?
Falsified
You wanted to keep reaching, straining
But something was past away
Left with the wondering why
As I hang upon this cross
Echoes of a child's sob curse deeper hue
This love of me hear
In this the prison-wall
From God of the hallelujahs
These tears I weep
Steven Mels
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Written May 11th, 2006
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this was a deep write uncle, and yet it very much touched me, thanks for sharing this and keep up the awesome poetry here.....
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Strong powerful poem, sweetie! Hope all is well with you! Love and hugs, Sandy
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EXCELLENT WORK!!!!!
Steven:
Son:
This is a very strong piece, filled with emotional confusions and deep emotions as well as thoughtprovoking situations.....
Very well penned.....
The imagery is awesome and the message although leaves the reader wondering, What's next?
Thank you for sharing your words ands thoughts with me on this site.....
I loved the originalty and uniqueness of your piece...
This was a great piece and an enjoyable one at that...
I love you son, very much and I miss you...
God bless you and guide you always.....
Be blessed with love and light always.....
As always Mom,
AngelicMistress
Edited on May 12, 6:45 because 'o0o0o0oPpPpPpSsSsSssss!
Misspelled word!'.
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very passionate in the beliefs of the Lords work,keep penning and good luck..Linda
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your always so strong with your words, i don't know how to "critique" it, but i will say that there's an amazing flow to the words that kind of hypnotizes me and i get lost in the whole jist of it all. i had to re-read the poem a few times before i could concentrate on it with my full attention. it's a swell write!
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Well son theres something going on that i have missed. It may not be any of my biz but seems like it is effecting two of my friends. Is there anything i can do??
beret55@iwon.com Let me know son.
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disturbed thank you much
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wow, this is a very interesting and strong poem, you did a grand job on this i really like this poem, it is just i don't know the word, keep it flowing
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