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Gift Received

You lift me up in my times of trial
Lift my head and You make me smile

You brush my cheek and dry my tears
Turn on the light and chase away my fears

I feel Your presence in the darkest night
You give me strength to keep up the fight

You are the moon, stars and sun
You are the God, the chosen one

You came to take away my pain
You taught me how to live again

I praise Your name for all your love
You send to me from heaven above

Now I will bow and give my life
Into Your hands I lay my strife

I trust you oh, Lord to guide my days
I celebrate Your life and give You Praise

Thank you Lord for all you’ve done
You fought my fight, the battle won.

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Written May 11th, 2006

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  • Learning2PaintYou
    November 25, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry.


  • Frogzter gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    A very uplifting spiritual piece! Your faith really shines forth in this one! Thanks for sharing and best wishes,

    BLessings,

    Frogz~


  • stavykm gold member
    March 20, 2008
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    Excellent

    What a magnificent poem you've written here. I thoroughly love you have for the Lord and Amen like you said in the end,

    Thank you Lord for all you've done
    You fought my fight, the battle won.

    I love the title Gift Received and what a gift he is. Thank you for sharing with me and best of luck in the contest.
    Wishing you many blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Talking Toni gold member
    March 16, 2008

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    Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I love the rhyme seam here and the poem is just beautiful full of praise to him....You have honored him well here and I thank you for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~


  • skitza
    August 2, 2006
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    Such a lovely poem.. and praise to God... I enjoyed reading this.. Nice rhyme scheme.. and it was very cheerful and plesant to read.

    'Thank you Lord for all you’ve done
    You fought my fight, the battle won.'

    Perfect ending.

    Thanks for entering.
    skitza


  • Rivkah Lynn
    May 11, 2006
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    This is such a beautiful peice of praise unto God. This is absolutely wonderful. You are a wonderful writer and I am so glad that you have joined up here so that this gift can be shared. Great job on this. Keep it up.

    Rivkah

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