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Stardust-luvr

Stardust-luvr
by Snifferpup

Sing to me,
oh sweet gentle angel,
and I will come
to take you away.

Beauty lies
in the depth
of your heart
and gives you
a glow that
transcends
reality.

Give me your heart,
a smile as well,
and I will come
to take you away.

Your love and kindness
has made its mark
on my heart
and on my face
as a smile grows
just for you.

Give me your heart,
sing to me,
and I will come
to take you away.

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Written May 11th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • PerfectImperfection
    June 18

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    Such a lovely piece of penning, for one you hold so dear. You may not get this - though I wanted to comment... Well penned!


  • pattyann4500
    May 23, 2006
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    I see you have used your charm one too many times and one called you on it. How lovely this poem, and I would probably swoon as well. Thank you again for supporting the ladies in the contest. Hugs, Patricia

  • Stardust-luvr
    May 21, 2006
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    Honey, the more I read my poem the more I fall in love with you each time I read it.xxxxxxxxxxx
  • snifferpup
    May 14, 2006
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    Well, my beauty, just how much younger am I, and is that a problem for you? I saw your picture and read your short profile on the contest, and I just knew you must be an angel! I'm glad you liked my poem for you. I'm sure you're heart is as beautiful as you are! Love, Pup
  • snifferpup
    May 14, 2006
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    Surgery, my lovely lady? I hope it is nothing serious. You have touched this heart of mine. You seem to be very sweet. Umm, are you married.

  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    ahaaaaa snifferpup!I see you are wooing all the ladies on here It seems as if you do know how I enjoyed reading this as well...and like I said , I will stop by for a visit on your pages asap. Not sure when asap will be though , ( I will be having surgery on Monday) and my time on here has been limited with pre-op things....and it might be a bit before I can return to the site post-op. But I heal fast.......so one never knows eh?
    Best wishes ,
    reenie

  • Stardust-luvr
    May 12, 2006
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    Thanx Snifferpup for the grand write. xxxxx I also saw from your author page you are younger than me mmmmmm perfect!!No matter the outcum of the contest -keep in touch
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