I feel like I'm choking
Being pushed underwater
Pressure
Pressure
Cutting slashing at my legs
Only wanting release
But never getting any
Pressure
Pressure
Books upon books
Any minute they will topple over
Pressure
Pressure
Everyone pushing me down
Never to let go
Not knowing how long I will last underwater
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Written May 11th, 2006
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oh hun! I really like this I like the repetition of pressure and how the imagry connects witht he feeling of it. the repetition making the reader feel the pressure themselves while the imagry helps them see what this pressure is doin gnad adding to it al the more. An amazng write and very heart felt, very true and in it's own way very beautiful! thank you so much for sharing!
~lamia -
You will make it I have been there its not fun but you will make it!
I believe in you! 
~Benji
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hey what's going on with you lil sis???
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i i am sorry.....
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