Lovely,
Caring Mother
this is to tell you that
Thankyou for being there for me,
mother.
Author notes
This is dedicated to my mom.
I pick option #2.
Written May 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- New members contest - May 2006 by AP Greeters.
300 points, ended June 5, 2006, 78 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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What a wonderful tribute to your mom. Excellent!
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sweet
Lucky mom you have. That was a sweet tribute to her.
I like how sweet it is. hugs WolfHeart -
For the most part, you did well with this. You might want to rethink the third line’s ending word though. It kind of leaves it hanging, where it doesn’t quite “compliment” the following line. Just my opinion of course.
~ John
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Very sweet. It's so nice to see a tribute to one's parent. So often we forget who deserves our thanks first. A lovely piece. Patricia
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WOW. Atlast a poem of Gratitude
good to read.. Thanks for the entry, good luck in the contest
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This is a very sweet poem. It really shows your care for your mother, and you manage to make the poem flow quite well.
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This is a sweet dedication to your mother. I'm sure she appreciates this thoughtful gesture as the perfect gift for the occasion.
Thanks for entering, and welcome to the site.
Best wishes in the contest,
Stacy
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Very sweet, warm and heartfelt. An important message since we all have a tendency to forget to speak the things we feel toward mothers. Never miss an opportunity to tell her how you feel.
Good luck in the contest and welcome to AllPoetry
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3 Stars ***
Hey there wonderful person... i see that you have a new poem here.. glad to know you have posted a poem now ... and hey..did you make your mother read this poem?? .. if no then i will kick you 
.. if yes.. then i am sure that she would have loved this poem and now she would feel better to know that you love her soo much ..
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up... your humble little friend...
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... ... - vic ( who else? )
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So sweet-simple sure, but that is what makes it that much nicer.~vj
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thankyou for ur comment. yeah i forgot to put the option number, thanks for telling me.
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thankyou! yeah i did put the option number now.
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thanks. yeah, i put the option number right now. thanks for telling me.
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thanks. this is the first time i wrote a cinquain so i wasn't exactly sure how it's suppose to be written.
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This is very touching.. and it's so important to let our mother's know you appreciate what they have done.. very sweet indeed. Thank you for entering the contest. Don't forget to follow the rules by placing your option # in your author's comments area. Best of luck to you and welocme to AP
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Sooooooo Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is such a beautiful cinquain you have penned here in honor of your mom. A mother's love is so special. I'm sure she will love this tribute you have done for her. Please don't forget to list the option you chose in the author comment box.
You want this to be eligible for a trophy. It is so heartfelt.
Welcome to All Poetry and enjoy your time spent on this great site. Joyce
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awe what a sweet and tender message you have captured inside this poem here you've done a great job with this cinquain
Please remember to put the option you chose in your author's comment to be eligible for a trophy
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This is a really sweet and lovely write that you have done here. A really nice way to say thankyou. You need to write in you comment box the option numbers that you have chosen. Well done on this write and good luck in the contest
WELCOME TO THE AP SITE
Dawn -
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