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Yes, I Am Addicted

hitting this pipe
watch the glowing ember
burn as i inhale
every bit of the plant's
tantalizing smoke.

exhaling and watching sweet smoke
collide with the mirror
smoke cascading
around the spot of impact
i love this
*happy and eyes burning*

smoking when i'm stressed
helps ease the tension
of the bullshit drama
life brings.
*mind and body yearning for it*

yes, i am addicted
but i'm happy to be so.
life's so much better
when your fucking stoned

Author notes

wrote this lil' ditto last night! i love my bad habit! lol can't help it
Written May 11th, 2006

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  • Intravenous Jesus
    July 29, 2007

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    Fuck yeah! Good stuff. To be honest the poetic quality wasn't exceptional, but I love your message. Burn on, dearest friend, burn on!


  • SliptheFlitch
    April 27, 2007
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    Damn.

    You know, I seriously liked this poem! Haha weed. Yes! A bad habit, but we have fun. ^.^

    Favorite part:

    i love this
    *happy and eyes burning*


    that made me smile like crazy.


    DAMN baby! Why didn't you put your name in the author's comments? Aww man, you're gonna make me play the bad guy now. Sorry, but I have to dq you....


    ~Slip~


  • Xxxxxxxxx
    March 28, 2007
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    Hail The Leaf !!!!
    wicked write.

    -cheers


  • lysdarling
    May 29, 2006
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    thanks much, i tried! this is the first weed poem i've been able to do justice!


  • sweethelper
    May 19, 2006
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    wooooooooooooooooooooooooooow ! this is soooooooo cooooool !
    thank you very much for the wonderful entry and best wishes in the contest !


    your fan
    TRUTHWRITER


  • -Ink Artist-
    May 18, 2006
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    This is awesome!! Toke on! Write on!

    ~*Lori*~


  • lysdarling
    May 18, 2006
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    thanks so much, you're too kind!


  • Alvinbenat
    May 17, 2006
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    Thumbs up!

    I grew up in the 60's and your poem is deja vu for me. Your poem made me chuckle out loud.

  • Alisakusnier08
    May 13, 2006
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    i understand where your coming from its the same for me but i liked this keep up the stuff.


  • blackened sight
    May 11, 2006
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    lys, hey ya know, you speak for so many! being addicted is great isnt it?! girl, keep on doin what chu do, youre good at it! love ya!

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