What do I do,
Do I run,
Do I hide,
This pain I can not handle,
My mom is dieing
and i cant explain the way i am feeling right now
my heart is breaking
and my world is slowly falling to pieces
right in front of my face
what do i do,
please explain to me
why this is happening to me
my mom is my world
and if she is gone
then there is not use for me
i am falling down
down to a place where i don't want to be
i am scared
and some days i think i should just
run and hide in a corner somewhere
some days i just think should
slit my wrist pop some pills
some how let out all my pain
some how just stop this pain i feel inside
why i don't
i guess that's an answer i will never know
so please tell me what i should do
to stop this
I NEED HELP!!!!
Author notes
This is how i am feeling right now if you dont like it i really dont care. my mind is all messed up right now and i am scared and i dont know what to do in other words I NEED HELP!!!!
Written May 11th, 2006
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This poem was really nicely written.. I think when your having problems in your life you should just write anything that helps you get rid of the pain. And it just makes the poem so much more saddening to read. Which in your case is good sense it means I am feeling your emotions through your write.
Im sorry you are having to go through all this. I recently almost lost my mother and I can understand how it feels. Hope everything is better now.
Best wishes.
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this is an awesome poem, so full of emotion and so deep. it's a very scary place to be in when the one you truly love is dying before your eyes and you can't do a thing about it. that kind of pain never really lessens. all you can do is let someone be there for you and lean on them when you need it. and while you may not think that helps it really does. again amazing write. and thank you for your comment on my poem, i really appreciate it.
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heartbreaking
this is honest, no flowerly language or anything, just pure emotion and i love it^_^ not that your hurting but that you pour your heart on the page so bluntly. pain can be positive in the sense that when we are in desperate situations we find what we are really made of. im sorry for your mother and i like the way you write. -
loved it!
wow. this is a very strong poem. if this is true i think that u should keep on letting your feelings out on poems and don't let ur anger built up inside. -
wicked
everybody i love leaves rather its family or friends and now my mom is leaving she is gonna be gone its hard and i cant stand it
well i thank you for commenting
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Wow this is a very emotional poem and i know how it is to lose someone you love with all your heart.
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