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© Our Little Angel (Couplet)

When our little angel came to us as if by Gods will,
although he has grown some so has our love for him still.


Copyright © 2006 Robert L. Huntsman

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Author's Comments:
Couplet - Two successive lines of poetry, usually of equal length and rhythmic correspondence, with end-words that rhyme. The couplet, for practical purposes, is the shortest stanza form, but is frequently joined with other couplets to form a poem with no stanzaic divisions.
Written May 11th, 2006

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  • AngelicMistress gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    GOOD JOB!!!!! GOOD LUCK!!!!!

    Such abeautiful and powerful message in only two lines..... perfectly described the feelings of a parent towards their child.... Great job, loved it...
    AngelicMistress


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 12, 2006
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    Lovely flow and beautiful words. thanks for this entry.... x


  • Dreamy Green Eyes
    May 11, 2006
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    Good job!

    Nice thoughts in a concise presentation... Good job! Peaceful feel to this read! Thanks for sharing... Good luck in the contest! Debi

  • Ir.muse
    May 11, 2006
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    Very beautiful and a nice picture.
    Wish you luck in the contest.

    Shahrzad


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    May 11, 2006
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    penned beautifully and so strong in word context, thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest..
    Linda


  • itllnever
    May 11, 2006
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    Thank you for the kind review and comments.


  • Malabu
    May 11, 2006
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    and a lovely couplet too......I did not realize I had written one when I entered this contest.....just thoughts that flowed from my hearts mind........we all come gifts of God....angels with wings....we only need learn to fly back home....where He awaits us.....love the thoughts and the write...
    Mal

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