I'm cryin' every ones tears
knowing life's most fears
everyone telling me something in my ear
about things I dont want to hear that ones death maybe near
My nerves are shot and my heart is caught in shock of pain
while every ones seeing me go insane
now everything is a sudden rush for me and every ones seeing it but no one feels it for me
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Written May 11th, 2006
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hey desarae
.. welll yeah.. its true.. people often see what we are going through and just give out their random crituques on it.. but very few are there who actually have time enough to FEEL our emotions... a small true and important fact expressed in a small and intelligent way.. 
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up... your humble little friend...
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... ... - vic ( who else? )
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WWWWooooowww this is amzing great work... this poem as well expresssed pain!!!goood job and good luck in the future.... can you say Ohh Ryaan!!!!
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This si brutally sad my sweet poetic friend. I mean your words are oozing sadness and it is so sad to read this poem. you have your own needs sorta say and ywet you're crying the tears of many others while no one cries yours. Sad but wel written. good work here
Paul
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wow.. so much said in so few lines. a wonderfully emotional piece. i have been there.. and back.. and there again. it's sometimes a never-ending cycle. anyway.. great job with this and keep up the writing..
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Ooooh! I have felt this same way before. And I've gone insane a couple times and it sucks! I love ya sis! I hope things get better!
Much love sis
Missy
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