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Message from Suzy Musey

Missing image
I looked for you at twilight,
I sought you on the morn--
but all I found to give a clue
was tacked up by a lure.

It said "I've just got restless
so I took a walk about--
I've found a hole to launch my pole
and you'll have to do without."

So here I sit just hoping
my words will drip from pen,
and pray the fish stop biting
so I'll see you once again!


Author notes

hehehe, Somebody plug that dang hole, I sure do need her!
Written May 10th, 2006

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  • Florida Sunshine
    September 15, 2008
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    I enjoyed the rhyme -- Very cleverly written. I also enjoye the imagery and metaphor you've penned within your write. -- The name of your muse is absolutely adorable. I love it.

    Thanks for entering the contest ~ it was my pleasure to read and review your work.

    Best of luck to you,
    Florida Sunshine


  • little-hug
    May 20, 2006
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    this made me smile I love how it rhymes and flows..perfect The imagery is lovely and fun and the picture at the top is sooo good too

    love
    ellie x

  • Rowan gold member
    May 11, 2006
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    This is so cute Sandi, I needed a giggle! Thank you!
    I'm so glad I came here this morning..such a refreshing dip into
    musedom!


  • wtchr
    May 11, 2006
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    Dear Sandi;
    Great write! You've truly 'caught' the spirit of this contest. And as many of the others who have commented, I am 'hooked' on your muse. Always enjoy seeing you post, you always give a good read. Thank you and best of luck in the contest.


  • Legend silver member
    May 10, 2006
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    Sandi my dear friend great to see your work appearing again .I have my worm, move over and lets see what I can catch
    A wonderful little poem, as ever you give me a most enjoyable read.Did i expect anything less when i clicked on.No. good luck in the contest,and don't stay away so long


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    May 10, 2006
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    lmao @ Miss's comment but I gotta laugh myself * rolls over laughing * Quite a nice funny edition to my poetry contest which shall soon be aclosing. I enjoyed the entry quite alot and I appreciate you entering the contest. Great writing all round and thank you once again. Good Luck Sincerely, Paul P.S. there are me and 2 other judges who decide winners


  • misselaineous
    May 10, 2006
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    that made me smile
    how big was the one that got away?
    elaine

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