They sat in the corner,
Amused by the show
And she knew it.
His voice gruff,
He commands her
On her knees, and
She did as he said.
Two of the men,
One taking each of
Her arms, chain
Them respectively
To the bed's upper frame.
Apprehensive, she
Didn't know if she
Should fear,
Or smile.
Her back was to them,
Facing the wall, and
This made the burning
Deep inside her core
Spark even more.
A new blindfold
Was carefully placed
Over her dark eyes.
She felt one of the men
Kneel before her, his
Heat radiating to her skin.
A soft caress of
His lips to hers,
And she shivers.
He moves closer,
His erected cock just
Barely grazing her
Seeping wetness.
Slowly he slides into her,
Teasingly, tauntingly.
Penetrated by just
The tip, leaving her
Wanting more.
She hears him
Clear his throat.
Her mind wandering,
Waiting, unknowing of
What was to come.
Wind slices the air
And the sting makes
Her body thrust forward,
Pushing him deep into her.
Another sting, and
She thrusts again.
The pain, exquisite,
The ride, most pleasurable.
Each sting coming harder
As she impales herself
Deeper onto his
Throbbing tool.
Suddenly, hands caress
Against her breasts,
And pain...
A pain that sent her
Soaring to new heights.
She knew she
Had been clipped
But as each blow
To her tender ass
Struck skin, she jolted
With more force.
She felt the chains
Riding against her skin
And fast realized
That her clips started
At each nipple, attached
To the chains leading
To his cock....
Each thrust bringing
More pain.
It was a pain
Both were very
Much enjoying.
He claps his hands,
One time, then two.
She heard the whip
Hit the floor.
Followed by a
Searing sting to her
Raw flesh,
Causing her to go
Over the edge
And with an
Ultimate thrust
Both exploded in unison.
The man kisses
Her again softly
And she can feel
The smile from him.
She knows, she
Has pleased Master,
Once again.
To be continued...
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Written May 10th, 2006
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Ripping...good
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Well oh yeah. Now I shall dream sweet
Until the dawn, my eyes do meet
Thanks for the comments, night.
Storm -
Sweetness
I take your whip
crack, flip, click, flick
as its shiny tip
hits you dripping quick.
Ciao for now dear
going to my bed
as dreams return here
you inside my head.
AT
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Thank you for your comments, I appreciate it. I think I may have spark up Master again, lol. It's been a while. Hmmm, maybe real soon.
Storm -
OMG I've read all of your Master's Pleasure Series and I absolutely loved them all. It's just so amazing because every time you say to be continued you can't wait to read the next part. I'm looking forward to reading every single one of them. You truly are an amazing writer. Yours sincerely, Emily
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I can't grasps words to express my thoughts.......this is definately an interesting write......I don't feel any bit of myself creating any emotional connection to this write, but is new to my eyes, this style that you enjoy to write.........
Anyway, peace and Love...
Matt -
Thank you again. I appreciate your support and following the series. Be on the look out for the next part.
Storm -
whewwww. Hot as always.I love the eloquence f your writes. I think the word "exquisite" that you use it just perefect to describe the scene. bravo.
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Thank you for your comments. Once I get past this shit hole of a feeling I am having, I will pop out another one. But they will be coming. Appreciate your time and support.
Storm -
Once more storm you leave me breathless and panting...the fact that I am supposed to be writing a paper right now doesnt seem relevant lol...Am desperatly looking forward to more dear.
Siren
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Thank you for your comments. I am glad you enjoy the series. As long as people are interested, I will find more to write. Thank you kindly fo rthe compliment.
Storm -
Awesome
I really like reading your seris. You have a talent for writing erotic poems. This one was very well laid out and very decriptive. Goob Job! I am looking forward to reading more!
~Kelly~ -
yes, yes, oh yesssssssss
and i will my dear i will -
A cold shower? A ice cold beer? A puff or two? LOL
Thanks for the comments, appreciate it. Stay tuned for more...
Storm -
Thanks sweetie. There will be more.
Mommie -
Oh, but Zorro, I wish to keep up the guys instead. (Ok the ladies too)
Thanks for the comments. I appreciate your following
Storm -
oh wow, hot hot hot, daymn hot!!!
well written and have I mentioned how hot this is?
pfft lady
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whoop, whoop!! way to go mommie!! i loved it, i cant wait for more... hehehehe
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once again, another fine addition to the series. It's been a long week and it's nice to come home to a hot read. keep up the great work.
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No no, not speechless. Please, offer up a few moans and sighs. LOL
Thank you for the comment, much appreciated
Storm -
Steamy
Wow!, You always leave me speechless. Our maybe it was suggested that I remain silent if i didn't want to be punished. Who cares, this sensual and erotic. Great job!!! -
LOL, glad you enjoyed. Also glad to know it, ummm, effects someone else besides me (Yeah, I get affected when writing them). What was it I said? Oh yeah just call me a horn ball!!! LOL
Thanks for the comments, appreciate them
Storm -
WOW
Whew you always get me wet and squirming! Love your work. Work, damn, I mean pleasure. This day has certainly been great so far, now where is that husband of mine!!!
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