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My Super Shining Star


I have this really great friend
She's great at being there
If I am feeling sad
I know that she will care

she always looks so happy
but I know how she really feels
she's hurting inside
but still she laughs and squeels

She knows just how to make it better
all the right things to say
when my heart is breaking
she is the only one who will stay

To make me laugh
to Make me smile
to make me feel better
if only for a while

The jumpy blonde girl
with the lovely smile
The girl with the beautiful blue eyes
the one who makes it all worth while

The girl is my hero
my super shining star
and I know with her help
I'll keep going far

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Written May 10th, 2006

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  • Claireabelle-
    May 10, 2006
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    BOOTS! I love this poem to death. Youre so freaking cute babe. I love you SOO much. Thank you. I feel special. ilybaby<33


  • Stardust-luvr
    May 10, 2006
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    A good write and it is always good to have a best friend that you can go to whom you can go to and can confide it about all your best of times and worst of times. A truest of friend whom will be there without a doubt with so much trustworthyness thatyou never need to fear to speak whats on your mind and visa versa. Good luck in the contest xxx

  • Mexicana08
    May 10, 2006
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    yeah your poem is true because the same thing goes on with me. i have at least two friends that i can go to, to talk to