The air we breathe cannot be seen
And yet it fills our breasts
The stars so high we cannot touch
But we admire them never the less
The depth of the world is oh so shallow
For we judge only what is in sight
If we close our eyes and open our minds
It will be revealed that night is day and day is night
Nothing is what it seems
If you trust in only with your eyes
Open your heart and release the spirit
Leave behind the tears and cries
True joy can only found
If you take the time to look deep within
The outer appearance is only a shell
While the truth is under the skin
Distance in fact is many miles
It is far if that is what you see
But if you look with your heart and not the eyes
I'm as close to you as you are to me
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My dear friends,
here is few of my feelings to share with you all !
Written May 10th, 2006
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Thanks for sharing your feelings! I can tell you wrote from the heart.
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A great way to express your feelings through writing.I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing your feelings with us.
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I really enjoyed reading this piece and I hope you keep up with is great writing, its very nice to read
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this is so good true feelings written from the heart your love shines with the words you write this is well written poetry true show of talent...
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Deep write, good flow good imagery, I like the message of this poem. Well written, Two Thumbs Up
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Wow a well written poem we have here love the imagery and the words flow with ease just all around a real show of talent great job...
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AN INSPRING WRITE!!!
A beautifully worded piece of QUATRAINp-a four line poem that gives the reader deep insight into life and how we feel as human beings.I admire the flow and the imageries in this great piece. -
"Distance in fact is many miles
It is far if that is what you see
But if you look with your heart and not the eyes
I'm as close to you as you are to me"
excellent piece, bravo darling bravo
well written and thought provoking
love
jamila
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very good write.. its a true shame that this is the way that things are when they do not have to be..
=) ~toni~
you should keep writing about things like this as i can see that you have a talent for it..
Edited on May 10, 4:25 p.m. because ''.
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