Little Girl
As the darkness comes
As the sun flies away
As the moon creeps upward
As the door creaks open
Drift away little girl
Float along sweet one
Glide through the sky
Soar from your pain
His hands flow over her body
Fingers splay over tender breasts
Taunting nipples to become firm
Slowly exploring, slowly undressing
Drift away little girl
Float along sweet one
Glide through the sky
Soar from your pain
Sliding down her smooth stomach
The probing, the preparing
Begins between her legs
She awaits the inevitable
Drift away little girl
Float along sweet one
Glide through the sky
Soar from your pain
Pushing, pulling, panting
Over and over thrusting, quivering
Then sighing, spilling his desire
Collapsing, withdrawing, leaving
Drift away little girl
Float along sweet one
Glide through the sky
Soar from your pain
Drift away little girl
Float along sweet one
Glide through the sky
Soar from your pain
Author notes
I wrote this to help me get some flash backs out of my mind.
Written May 10th, 2006
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I can only imagine how disturbing these visions must be for you. They were quite disturbing to me, as well.
I really liked the refrain, and there's a beautiful flow to this. Did you ever put this to a melody?
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wow it has been forever since i have been on this site, but this poem still draws emotion out of me i never thought possible. i had read it long ago, but since had forgotten about it. i admire your strength more than words can speak. thank you for your courage.
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I have seen so many personal poetry on this site and it horrifies me how true they are. I love your poem. It was very haunting and very deep and emotional. Continue to use your creativity.
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oh im fucking crying,,, dam this poem was so touching and sad.. i reaaly liked it though
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heart opened
I am soooo sorry that this kind of stuff happens...... your story is touching, the pain flows through the words..... and makes me cry for every little girl in such a plight, I am truly sorry this happened -
wow. i'm so sorry for your pain. this was very well written and holds so much emotion. its a great poem, but the circumstances that created it are so so wrong. i can relate to this a lot. if you wanna talk feel free to pm me. well done on a really good write. i hope it helped you.
take care. -
Wow... I'm just... *sighs* I'm so sorry... this enrages me sooo much. At least it's over, and if it isn't, then please tell someone. That bastard doesn't deserve to walk on this Earth, nor do any others that do this to little girls (not just little girls, anyone). They need to make stronger laws against these sick f*cks. Sorry... anyways, this was an absolutely amazing poem. The flow was perfect, and I loved how you repeated this stanza...
"Drift away little girl
Float along sweet one
Glide through the sky
Soar from your pain"
That part is just so powerful, and it brings tears to my eyes. I know that there is no way to forget, but there are ways to move on. Accept that, yes, it is a part of your past. But just know that you are sooo much stronger and better than him. You CAN heal. It just takes time. Even though you don't know me, I am here for you anytime you need. Sometimes it's easier to vent to strangers
Jeanette*~ -
wow, i can relate to this..
Its just amazing..
Im here if you need to talk. kia kaha
Meri xx
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