It's like a warped mirror
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your reflections of me are so false.
Don't think I can't see through it
MIRRORS CAN ONLY REFLECT THE TRUTH
I'm waiting for the day you're glass is smashed.
I'll use the pieces to show just how much you hurt me.
no idea,
no idea
no idea of the noise and the pain, the noise that never, ever, EVER
Stops.
It rots
It rots my brain until i lose the will -
and there's the fear -
to wake up and know that i needn't be here
I cannot face your lies any more. this isn't existence.
its a struggle to free myself from your shit. your venom. your total self absorbency.
my skin can't take much more.
Beautiful,
painful
ribbons that write your name in red and spit in your face.
your hand-prints on the corpse.
so pale, so pure
"why ruin yourself?"
why?
WHY??? TELL ME WHY
because i don't deserve any more
Worthless
but better than you.
And why so many tears? do you want to stain a face forever?
can i stain you with TRUE FEELINGs?
Can i show you what an idiot you are?
CHILDREN play at make believe
not callous, hateful mind games that
are...
pathetic.
and so lonely. and so sad.
and so
unforgivable.
Silence -
i need more.
do you want to see?
do you need to?
Do you HAVE to, in your sick little world?
Don't you know how dangerous this is?
Don't you know?
You don't?
Then fuck off. FUCK OFF.
take it away.
out of my face.
While i still have a face
While I'm not faceless among that thousands
worse...better...just as bad...all of them, faceless, moaning,trapped and wanting out.
We can't let them be normal.
we WANT to be normal. that's what makes us sane. and what makes you sick.
we found her, wandering
sitting by the mirror
and watching, waiting to get in.
We found her, Lord, looking for your children, looking
for love
for understanding.
we found her, Lord, too late.
All of them, too late.
TOO LATE.
Most already under - there was nothing we could do.
we were too busy trying to save the one calling for help
but refusing to grab the line.
getting close to sinning.
if you send me to hell, I'm taking you with me.
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Written May 10th, 2006
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all i have to say
is fucck yeah!!!!
you rock at this.
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the ways am mazing piece so differenr but unique all in all ty for sharing it
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that was a good poem. I really enjoyed all of them. you have a great talent good job
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'we WANT to be normal. that's what makes us sane. and what makes you sick.'
'we were too busy trying to save the one calling for help
but refusing to grab the line' - love these lines, han. dont reallyh wanna say much more here -
wow
wow!
i can't say much more, caus'...i don't know how to analyse something like that...so personal (i think?) and intense...however, it sort of gives me a better insight into stuff..
keep writing..its good 4u, and u r VERY VERY GOOD!!
love uuuu! - ur wife (!) - lozloz xxx @>-;- -
thankyou so much. you all seem to understand it so well.
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Wow this is stunning, so powerful and hateful, yet i relate to it, your words are wonderfully emotional and angry, and the short sharp lines are so effective in getting this across, like you keep changing your thoughts and cant get all the hate out of you quick enough i guess... "my skin can't take much more.
Beautiful,
painful
ribbons that write your name in red and spit in your face." - i really loved that bit, the ribbons image was fantastic, its such a pretty thing to put in such a hateful poem i guess. beautiful poem and so sadly true... x-Con-x -
ty so much Mr V, you're comments mean the world to me
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youre right. mirrors only do reflect the truth. i think its ppls vision that is obscured sometimes though wtih vanity. i lke how you used the font to enhance your feelings and expression. im not very good at that kinda thing, lol. kinda of an angry/sad poem. i think you did an excellent and beautifuly original job of expressing your feelings.
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boy do i know the feeling. such rage, hurt, sadness, dispair expressed in this piece. hang on hun, shit gets better. always here if ya need me
hell
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this is really good!Wow!im speechless!
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Haunting...In a Good Way!
Wow.... Awesome poem... The flow was great, like it was meant to be put to a beat... You are a great writer... Keep up the read-worthy writing!
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Brooke
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