Just about me...
Just so you can see
The real true me
And all that I feel and see.
I know I may be odd
Everyone thinks they know me
But the truth is they don't
I'm a completely different person than they see
If they only knew
How I really feel
between my life and my family
they might get to see the real true me!
Author notes
This was a spur of the moment poem! I hope you like it!
Written April 16th, 2006
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this is really great, mostly because it is hard to actually know the real person. i really like how you state this in this poem, great job!
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Aww, this is so sweet. Keep it up!!
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Dear lovin-casey, I do so like this write.
Reflection you say to my brother Penz, 'tis ever so true
as I saw myself each line I read.
Keep kicking butt till they hand you a gold.
I give you nice shiny brass for this poem.
Perseverance overcomes all odds !! smile
Linda -
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Thank you so much! I am so glad that you liked my poem!!
How do you know it reflects me?
I tried to make it reflect just about everyone!! I will try to kick some butt but I can't seem to win any contests!!
lovin-casey -
like they say, never judge a book by it's cover. The only way you could know a person a 100% is by being that person... hehe
nice write, it reflects you
Pen On! (and kick some butt
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~penz~
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