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The Shallow End

you live your life
in a kiddy pool

you'll never learn to swim that way.





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Option 8)Shallow World
Written May 10th, 2006

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 18, 2006
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    this is honest, i mean this is the true, i love the message on this, i mean you did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

  • Brokenpen
    May 18, 2006
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    heheh good write. keep it up.

  • saativva
    May 10, 2006
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    good...lol. damn good.