As I lay in bed
I dream of days gone bye
I dream of lovers in my past
their sweet motion I so lack
I long to hold them in my arms
but those times have passed
So it time to find sweet motion
with someone else at last
A new lover I can hold
And make new memories
one that I can touch and please
and maybe feel their needs
I can't promise her forever
but I'll give my all right now
I'll make her my everything
for as long as our love last
So kiss me, love me, squeeze me tight
And never leave my arms
Let my touch embrace you
for there is no looking back
Author notes
Nothing is more painful then the moving on, I hope we can all move on with life love and the everlasting. I hope you all enjoy it, And hope it gets someones attention. Have fun.
Written May 10th, 2006
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- Love, Dark and sad poetry...Let me have your best by PointShoesAndPoetry.
300 points, ended June 12, 2006, 57 entries
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Awww I love this piece. It's so...loved up! lol I can feel your feelings and emotions in this poems and I love in which I can do that. The imagery is grand and the flow and rythm complement each other perfectly. Keep penning out these great writes! I love reading your work!
~marie lee
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I really love the way you begin, with the mentioning on the memories, and then the letting them go. It's a perfect beginning and backstory. The way you continue impresses me no less. This is great, AmericanInIraq, keep writing!
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this is a great peice...i love how u put into words exactly how i (and im sure alot others) feel. its very easy to relate to.
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I love this poem. I like the idea of you moving forward. never look back because one day you'll get trapped in the past
Amz -
I loved it. Sometimes its easier to look back than to look forward. I hope you found your love and that you are happy
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i really like this piece.
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this is a lovely piece.
but theres few corrections in here.
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but those times have passed
past tense should be "HAD" instead of "have" ?
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Let my touch embrass you
"embarrass" or "embraces?"
sorry... i'm not trying to be harsh
i like your poem
thank you for joiing good luck
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