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My Lyrical Love~~

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Kiss me baby, I need your affection
Because it's only you, I'm longing for
You have given my life, Resurrection
I know you love me, but I love you more

My soul is everlasting, with lifetimes
To caress you through the winds of my love
Your delicate flower of passion shines
And you're every girl I'm dreaming of
 

So, I beg you, embrace my hand
Be my lover, my wonderland
I shall forever dream us two
Baby, I can't stop loving you 


The light house on the dark side of the sea 
And your passion within, I so cherish 
When I write love songs, you're sweet melody
Gives me hope, my heart, will never perish

The feelings of mine, once crushed s l o w l y
Soar through crystal skies, with purpose anew
And baby, oh darling dear, please love me
For I'd do anything to be with you


So, I beg you, embrace my hand
Be my lover, my wonderland
I shall forever dream us two
Baby, I can't stop loving you

Light Fades 1x

I shall forever dream us two
Baby, I can't stop loving you

Fades 3x

Baby, I can't stop loving you

Baby, I can't stop loving you

Baby, I can't stop loving you

I love you~

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Thanks for reading me, my lyrical love, by: Timothy~
Written May 10th, 2006

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  • Lonely
    November 8, 2008

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    That could make a perfect song.. So beautifully penned.. The passion of love, it flows from the lines.. My most favourite part was:
    The light house on the dark side of the sea
    And your passion within, I so cherish
    When I write love songs, you're sweet melody
    Gives me hope, my heart, will never perish

    Brilliant stuff.. You really inspire me dear friend

    Love

  • FindingFate
    August 28, 2006
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    I could not describe this without repeating what has already been said. Timothy thank you for leading me to your wonderful words. I am so happy that there is no way to explain that either...lol. I should have checked you out when I met Lynda. What a wonderful night this has turned out to be...Trina


  • lunacy-wishes
    May 13, 2006
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    I like this it took me back to a happy time in my life, where i could relate to this. Its a nice rythm and it flows perfectly, id love to hear it in a song

  • xlilprincessx
    May 13, 2006
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    Wow that's brilliant, Flows so nicely and it's soooooo sweet! Keep up the great work!!


  • Pollycheck
    May 12, 2006
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    Thumbs Up

    This is definitely something that should be put to music. The flow and tempo are so powerful and the words are truely songlike. You definitely have a gift.


  • Roseleaf
    May 12, 2006
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    brilliant

    this is brilliant you done a great job with this time great lyrics indeed well done


    ~~Pauline


  • XxXdArCyNiCoLeXxX
    May 11, 2006
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    Once again......this is the best poem I have ever read!....I was just glancing through your page and I must say that I am mesmerizd.I can't tell you what a wonderful poet that you are.You seem like a great father and a great wife.You're a very talented person.I loved this poem so much that I had to post it on my page.I've read through amillion poems and I have never before can upon a poet as wonderful as you.Never stop writing b/c it's your gift to the world....I know you touched my heart with your poems......


    *DarcyNicole*


  • Shadow Storm
    May 11, 2006
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    This is a deeply beautiful love poem, Timothy, and I greatly enjoyed reading it. Your words are both powerful and passionate, your imagery is enchanting, and your expressive style is quite original. I loved your references to "the winds of my love," "The light house," and "crystal skies." I have a strong feeling that this is also a song! Wonderful Writing! ~Charles~


  • nobodys looking
    May 11, 2006
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    Awesome

    really really good.

  • jh64
    May 11, 2006
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    Rat Pack Cool

    Absolutely mind blowing awesome ! This puts a universe of love songs in the dust this is incredible.


  • Billythekid
    May 11, 2006
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    That was awesome. I would love to hear what it sounds like as a song. You are truly a gifted lyricist.
    -Billy the Kid-

  • haylow
    May 11, 2006
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    brill

    Really great lyrics! Keep writing! Haylow x


  • burdened
    May 11, 2006
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    This is absolutely beautiful, as i read it, it flowed through my head as a song, not neccessarily as a poem, but as lyrics and a song. Brilliant, i have known a few people to try to do this, and they do not come out with something so lovely and rhthmical! Well done, and god bless X

  • pimpin it all 16-f
    May 11, 2006
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    WOW this was great and i really really liked it i wish some guy would write something like this to me but i guess i anit that muched love but im glad u feel like this about someone keep up the good work


  • May 11, 2006
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    fantastic I would love to hear you sing it


  • FlamingPoet6887
    May 11, 2006
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    Beautiful. Absolutly beautiful. And very well written. Excellent job!


  • bludstaindsoliloquy
    May 11, 2006
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    Well written, full of soul and intimacy! Keep penning . . . keep sharing . . . and much luck to you with any/all future poetic ventures!

    Maggie


  • Piper77
    May 11, 2006
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    Wow! I love poems with lyrics in them, if they are good, and this one sure is good. Keep writing!
    *snap*


  • masterblaster gold member
    May 11, 2006
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    Hi, I cannot control the click, when your name comes up my figers rush to click,lol, another super write from you, drat I have no applauses left,and points are down so low I need a magnyfying glass to find them, wonderful my friend, hugs Di


  • Kalexi
    May 11, 2006
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    Bro T

    What a sweet and lovely song, I assume you wrote the music for this, would be a beautiful melody

    Hugs and Love
    Karen


  • One Beautiful Soul
    May 11, 2006
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    Very soulful and loving. Your words flow very smooth I like that. Love is such a beautiful thing. Keep up the wonderful beauty of your words. I will be back for more.. Bravo

    Amy


  • poeticpieces
    May 11, 2006
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    AWESOME!

    I love this song, and I get to hear you play it, because I'm your son, so nah, nah, nah........ Great piece Daddio~

    Love lil Tim


  • forbidden-colour
    May 11, 2006
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    I loved reading this, its a very beautiful peice.
    keep the writting up hun!

    take care
    sophie


  • Whispering Winds
    May 11, 2006
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    My Dearest Timothy,

    This is such a beautiful, and inspiring write. I can the music playing, as your wonderful voice sings along. I love you Timothy, and always will. You are the only one i dream of, the only one i adore, and the only one I truely belong to.

    I'll forever be loving you

    Tammy


  • richnlove
    May 11, 2006
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    my sister told me to read this so i did. i am very happy that i did as it is beautifully written. thank you for sharing this with me and i will have to tell her thank you also. sandy

  • motioncityromance86
    May 10, 2006
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    Very Impressive, great Job


  • XxXdArCyNiCoLeXxX
    May 10, 2006
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    Wow....I love this....do you mind if I add this to my profile as my favorite poem?


  • Jeri gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    Hi,
    This is a great set of lyrics. I bet this sounds excellent.
    God's touch
    Jeri


  • rosepoet
    May 10, 2006
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    Amazing write as always I just love to read good love poems and here is the place to find them.very well written write and your words are so lovely Kiss me baby, I need your affection
    Because it's only you, I'm longing for
    You have given my life, Resurrection
    I know you love me, but I love you more thanks for this wonderful read and keep up the good work

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    A very well written write indeed.I was smiling whilst reading this at it`s sweetness.It offers love and asks for love,I like that balance.It has an easy to remember hook line ,vital within any lyrics.The reader is capivated by the emotion of the words and the rhythm appears naturally,this just flows with ease,nothing to unravel,just a love song singing it`s heart out waiting to be heard and deserving to be heard,love and light,Yvette PS Good luck in the contest

  • SundayMourning
    May 10, 2006
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    Wow, this is so 'weightless'. I know it may sound funny, but that's how I feel when I read this. This is one of those passages that you read and afterward, you just have a lighter sense about you. Like a weight lifted off of you. Great job. It makes me think of my boyfriend.


  • Bennington
    May 10, 2006
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    I believe it would do an amazing song ..too romantic 2 me .. but its nice though..

  • Rowan gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    Now that was definitely lyrical, and oh, so loving! What a lucky girl to be at the end of this adoration!
    I had a tune in my head right from the start..
    nicely done!


  • vivela silver member
    May 10, 2006
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    A beautiful love poem. Your words are so lovely. I hope she will love you. How could she not. Your expressivenesss is wonderful! Warm Regards...vivela


  • trustjab
    May 10, 2006
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    nice song, good emotion, I'm short of words, I don't got much to say on love right now, maybe cus I'm envious


  • dutch2lips gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    Great song, would love to hear that on music.
    (sorry, my applauds are spent for today )


  • B Chandler
    May 10, 2006
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    Flawless

    grabs a tissue to wipe away my tears So masterfully executed anyone who hasn't read this yet ought to be slapped Such strong and subtle emotions visibly evident

    Rae


  • Empty Closet
    May 10, 2006
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    hey this was really good!

  • Suicidal Girl
    May 10, 2006
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    Sexy. You rule.

    Amazing.
    I love it.
    I love love songs. I really do. They make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.


  • Mad Moon silver member
    May 10, 2006
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    Awesome!! Full of warmth...Dripping in wonderful romance, my friend. So beautiful, and from the heart. I adore it, Timothy! It flows so smoothly. Could hear the soft music of your soul there.... Good to read you again. I've been gone for so long. Having a rough time, and this really put a smile back in my heart. Thank you for that, Sweetie! And, for the hug you sent my way the other day. Love Ya Lots, dear friend.


  • BloodyxNightengale
    May 10, 2006
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    OH MY GOSH...I would love to hear this recorded. It touched my heart in every place imaginable. I, certainly, am in awe of this lyric.....AWESOMENESS!!!
    Lisi


  • earthstar
    May 10, 2006
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    very creative

    Very good, bravo is a must for such a neat poem.


  • Sunkissedrose
    May 10, 2006
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    LYrically Impressive

    Ok, now when do I get to hear you sing it? This was beautifully written, and a very touching piece. You are so talented....sometimes I am in awe.
    ~Carrie


  • May 10, 2006
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    that is a beauty. i couldn't have written it better if i tried.

  • Twisted-Dog
    May 10, 2006
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    This song is beautiful. Wonderful flow. Your work is amazing, and i'm definitely going to be reading more of your poems. Great job!


  • xxxFiGhTiNgBaCkxxx
    May 10, 2006
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    wow i like this good job
    Jennifer

  • Summer2000
    May 10, 2006
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    i really injoyed this keep on the good work i just join yesterday and got two of my poems on hope you like it you look and keep on doing all these good works have fun ttyl buh byes

  • Broken Pieces
    May 10, 2006
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    Awesome

    this is so romantic, i dont know what else to say. IT is so romantic yet so very sad. Its like you love that person, but they wont come back to you. I loved it. very nice!!~~


  • Cry-n-WishTheEnd
    May 10, 2006
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    awww very pretty lyrics.Whoever you wrote that for must feel very loved.haha.


  • u took my user name
    May 10, 2006
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    this flows very well as a song. very very well. i really enjoyed the read. it seems like the words flow right from the heart in such a pure manner... and i am sure they are from the heart.
    This would be a song for the angels to listen to. great job. best wishes,
    L4L


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 10, 2006
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    My sweetness, I think this is beautifully written! You always write with your heart and soul and it shows every time! I have missed you so much! Thank you for sharing your heart! Love you!
    Sandy


  • Stardust-luvr
    May 10, 2006
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    awesome

    Wow!! i have so missed reading your most tender and loving writes and find this jump out to my heart in glee. Especially:
    Kiss me baby, I need your affection
    Because it's only you, I'm longing for
    You have given my life, Resurrection
    I know you love me, but I love you more

    As well as the part:
    The feelings of mine, once crushed s l o w l y
    Soar through crystal skies, with purpose anew
    And baby, oh darling dear, please love me
    For I'd do anything to be with you

    Thinking of our everlasting friendship has my brain and thoughts in overdrive with a poem such as this awesome write my dear friend. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


  • irene plunkett
    May 10, 2006
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    this is a beautifully written piece great job hunny much love fom irenexxxxx


  • ebaby
    May 10, 2006
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    good work!

    such a tender loving poem/song, you did a great job at this and the flow and rythem is just great....


  • Sorrows Redemption
    May 10, 2006
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    wow, i love this poem a lot. Its really good! You did an awesome job, keep up the good work!

  • Damselflydreams
    May 10, 2006
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    This is a very sweet song I would love to hear the melody


  • weaverwonderland
    May 10, 2006
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    EXCELLENT!

    A beautiful song, love this my son~

    Alice In Wonderland~


  • Xx Alice xX
    May 10, 2006
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    I love music, most of it is very poetic. A few of my poem I write to the music in my head. This is great, and so romantic. It is easy to read and so full of what a person should say. well done.

  • FindingFate
    May 10, 2006
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    This is one of the better lyrics pieces I have read... You are very good....Trina.


  • tomisb
    May 10, 2006
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    This has a lovely feel to it. I wish I could hear the music. One more step for AP another break for the user. I find myself wanting to add an article or modifier but then it would ruin the rythmn and that is everything. Good images and nice metaphors. Keep up the good work. Love, Tom B.


  • Gods child40 silver member
    May 10, 2006
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    EXCELLENT!!!

    I CAN SEE MYSELF AT THIS CONCERT, WOW, WHAT A BIG CROWD, THE CROWD IS VERY EXCITED!! I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM, I CAN FEEL THE LOVE IN THIS!! VERY BEAUTIFUL BACKGROUND. THANKS FOR SHARING!


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 10, 2006
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    timothy--this is great. you have really written a great song and i know a lot of girls/women who would be so happy if someone would write like this for them. great job. viyanna


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    Brilliance True Gold in Heart & Soul!

    When I open my eyes
    Your lyrical love lifts us all
    High in the clouds a curtain call
    I love when you and I collide
    With the love we sing in both our eyes
    Ah Poeticweaver, this is a fabulous song
    That all of us can dream with you and sing along!
    Universal in flavour and utterly beautiful in form and content… Seems I sing the same song 2…
    “Baby, I can't stop loving you” will always be my heart song to you~
    Namaste Blessed Be, to all our hearts eternally~


  • Wandika gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    A lyrical poem with stage ques and all.
    When is the performance?

    Very nice Timothy.

    Jim

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