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Sands of Time

If not for the sands of time
we would never meet
ships would not pass in the night
we could never share our heat

Time takes its toll
but it gives us so much more
love, life, memories
what wait through the next door

Love would never come to pass
time would just stand still
thank god for the shifting sand
and for keeping life so real

Author notes

option 1, I find this hopeful and cheerfull,  Dedicted to all the single ladies over 40, I coming to get you LOL
Written May 10th, 2006

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  • 0darkAngel0
    May 12, 2006
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    lol @ your comment on your author's questions/comments.
    the poem is beautiful.
    the ryhthm the flow ... very nice
    keep on writing


  • Lili Liaison
    May 10, 2006
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    this is a very nice poem. your rhythm works well. Thanks for entering and good luck to you!

    ~*~Austyn~*~


  • Sandygram
    May 10, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM *grin*

    Wow you are going to have your hands full on here with this poem and your author's comment. This was such a pleasure to read this morning. Great rhyming. Best of luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. God Bless. Hope all is well over there on the shifting sands of Iraq. Take care, Sandy