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Still Apart (working title)

I've been fine
 since you left me
but the pain still lingers

I see you often
 I see the memories
   I see the happiness
     I see the sadness

Every time we glance
 I see through your eyes
I see through your tough facade
 I see your discontent
I see we share it

Stupid reasons
 Which should have been overlooked
Which should have been forgiven
 Broke me to pieces

Now i hear you miss me
 Did it take you this long to figure that out
I missed you the moment you gave me the letter
 I missed you terribly

Stuck between people
 Desiring to be with each other
Scared to be the reason
 For something terrible (to happen)

This lovely sin
 Whom many discriminate
This secret sin
 Which we share

I missed you terribly
 I still do
You brought out the beauty in me
 You brought out the joy in my life

Left in the hands of fate
 That our fate will end with each other
Or in the hands of your heart
 To take my heart
which you always had
 Which you always will

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Written May 10th, 2006

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  • xorandomxo
    February 13, 2008
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    this was a beautiful poem.
    i love the title.
    thanks for entering.
    good luck.

    unbreakable♥


  • infinitechaos07
    January 10, 2008
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    Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • Rock-Junkie
    May 10, 2006
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    awww.. this is sweet! ..::teehee::.. i think that you should give this to her. only a suggestion. welp gonna go find something to do on this computer.. if i can that would be a miracle cause they blocked almost EVERYTHING! byes lurve ya.
    <3 Triste