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Sweettie

BABY I KNOW YOU LOVE ME AND I LOVE YOU AND I JUST CAN'T WAIT TO MARRY YOU.
YOU ARE MY EVERYTHING AND YOU MEAN SO MUCH.
I KNEW YOU WERE THE ONE FOR ME WHEN WE FIRST TOUCHED.
I HATE THAT WE FIGHT AND WHEN I AM SAD.
I LOVE YOU ALWAYS AND I WILL NEVER MAKE YOU SAD.
I WANT TO BE YOUR WIFE AND HAVE SOME KIDS.
I JUST CAN'T WAIT TO BE IN YOUR LIFE FOR GOOD.
I LOVE YOU 2 DEATH AND I AM GLAD YOU PURPOSED.
I HOPE THAT I MARRY YOU SOON BECAUSE I LOVE AND I WANT YOU AS MY HUSBAND.

Author notes

THIS IS A POEM ABOUT MY B/F AND I LOVE HIM SO MUCH!!!!!!!!
Written May 10th, 2006

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  • HowardsDaughter
    May 11, 2006
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    sorry bout that, was just testing cause my previous comment didnt go through,
    good poem, well doen and keep it up


  • HowardsDaughter
    May 11, 2006
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    ...

  • Availea
    May 10, 2006
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    Sweet. Hope everything works out the way ya want it too. Only 2 more days and then we're done!
    Blessed Be & Brightest Blessings,
    Sarah


  • Millie Music
    May 10, 2006
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    awww nice job
    i thought this was a very nicely wrote piece
    all the best millie


  • NickN
    May 10, 2006
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    Good write. Full of ... Love? Just kidding of course it is. Great job hun.

  • BrainStorm
    May 10, 2006
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    Swettie!

    ''I LOVE YOU DEATH'' ...?
    What were you trying to say?

    I liked it all,,,But that?
    Im lost...

  • Vampiric Deathwish
    May 10, 2006
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    I like it! Its very good!

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