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Christopher Maxfield.

words cant explain what you mean to me,
even though im not your girl, im sure everyone can still see.
you captured my heart & became my soul,
without in my world, nothings whole.
id give up anything for you in a heartbeat,
whenever you kiss me, my knees go weak.
baby, i hope you know how you affect my life,
in my dreams, i can see me being your wife.
you showed me how to be strong + feel alive,
if it wasnt for you holding me up, i probabley
wouldnt've survived.
and everyday im alive, i pray and thank you for all you've done,
you've taught me how to love, feel beautiful and have fun.
im always gonna be here, as your lover or your friend,
this love is forever, its called true + will never end.
your my best friend and ill always be here,
when no one else would, you still cared.
thank you for all you've ever done for me,
you picked me up & gave me a reason to be.
i love you and will always be your babygirl,
your my heart, my soul + my entire world.
nothing compares to all our endless nights,
the memories we share, the goodtimes, the fights.
the days when me + you were together 24/7,
nothing could come close, nothing could've been better.
and even though were not together right now,
im still standing tall, and your still showing me how.
because i believe you when you confess your love to me,
because i know that me + you is how its supposed to be.

              i love you.

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in love.
Written May 9th, 2006

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  • tomboysk8r13
    October 21, 2007

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    it is very detailed and i like that

    im only nine and i am not very good at writing poetry yet or writing it in formation, but i love ur poetry is is beatiful. Plz check on my page, by the way i am goobermeyer.


  • ImJustALostMemory
    July 28, 2006
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    Awe Caitlin. This reminds me of how I feel about Bryan. Things between me and him fell apart. Like literally it's horrible but like I'm doing what I can to hang in there and stay strong. You are a person I look up to when it comes to it because you are a strong person, you never give up, and you stay like that. This write shows how strong you stay and it also shows nothing can bring you down. I am glad you had this amazing relationship slash friendship with Chris. I don't know if it is still this way today because my god I haven't talked to you in god know's forever. I just wanted to comment this and let you know how amazing I thought this was and that I am still here! I miss ya girl. I hope you're doing great! Love ya

    Fallon


  • ZerOxinxWonderland
    July 6, 2006
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    Touching

    MOMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    hah I found you
    love love love love love you


  • Something Real
    May 10, 2006
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    Aww this is Crystal and this is such a good poem caitlin! Im happy for you.