"God,"says the child,"thanks for bringing peace to the world,
and unclogging that white toilet that swirled and swirled"
"Good night,God. I love you."
Author notes
Written May 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- Two lines of brilliance #4 by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended May 10, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thanks for the comment.
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2 lines of brilliance alrite
great job
only 11 aye... damn
youv already got so much talent
CJ -
This is such a sweet little write. Thanks so much... x LB


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