Would you think that distance changed us?
Would you think I really cared?
Would you think I'd ever leave you?
Never darling
I'm always here
I'll wait an hour
a month
a year
To see those eyes
To kiss those lips
No baby, no tears
I'll hold you a little tighter, honey
Can't wait to see you home
We'll sleep again together
So comfy in our room
No,
Nothings changed
I'm still your girl
You're still my man
You'll always be my hero
I'm your number one fan
Would you think that distance changed us?
You know I'm always here
I'll hold your hand
I'd never forget
Baby
I'm your biggest fan
Author notes
My fiance is in the Navy, scares me to think of how I'll feel when he goes on deployment, but this is probably what I'd say.
I hope your homecoming goes well! God Bless
Written May 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- Soldiers Coming Home by Wrench-X.
500 points, ended May 11, 2006, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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This is lovely sin, such a great picture of love and everything it should be, the emotions in this piece are just overwhelming. I'm do happy you have this, fantastic piece hun
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this is a wonderful piece...
shows the meaning of love
thank you for sharing -
Beauteeeeeful
Aww, Sin, that was beautiful. You have a way of speaking colloquially, but preserving an eloquent effect. In short, I love the way you write. So much emotion pours through your poetry that it's unreal. Great write, my friend. *Stands and applauds*
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