Where oh where is my Rubber Duck
Where oh where can it be
Without my duck I am out of luck
Where oh where is my Rubber Duck
I am so alone, my life does suck
With no-one to splash with me
Where oh where is my Rubber Duck
Where oh where can it be?
Author notes
My own choice.Hope it elicits a smile.
Written May 9th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Make me smile people! by Extreme Simplicity.
400 points, ended May 15, 2006, 10 entries
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yeah! bath time. lol
this was lovely and I like how you used the background to aid in the "rubber-duckiness" of this piece -
Haha, nice little poem. But the lines are awfully thick for a skinny poem- you did submit a poem in grasping the correct theme though. Thanks lots for entries
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Very nice, attempt at gaining a smile achived. Thank you for entering!
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Funny.
Rubber ducky, you're the one. <.< Hehe. This was funny and it made me grin. Good work, very simple and amusing. -
never to old for playtime in the bath. its too bad the tub isnt as big as it used to be....
cute and nostalgic. well done.
Edited on May 09, 11:17 p.m. because ''. -
i smiled!... hehe... rubber duckies never grow old... thier too much fun for that... lol... too bad i seem to have misplaced mine in these last several moves... sad... i guess that means i need a new one... hehe... just rambling here... sorry. happy.
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