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To Justin

I miss you more and more each day,
My heart is torn in two.
Why must you be so far away?
Please know that I Love You.

If I didn't it wouldn't hurt so bad,
I wouldn't feel the need to cry.
But there's more pain than I've ever had,
And a flood's fallen from my eyes.

It's been too long since I've seen your face
Or heard you speak my name.
I wish I was back in that place.
I hope you feel the same.

I know you 'd call me if you could.
I just wish I knew the why.
I just wish thst I understood
So I wouldn't have to cry.

Until you call, I'll clutch your ring
And wear your shirt to bed.
A memory is a powerful thing,
And you never leave my head.

Author notes

My boyfriend hasn't called me in almost a month, and he lives 4 hours away so I can't just go and see him.  I know he has his reasons (probably his parents) but I just wish that he would find someway to contact me.  I Love him so much, and the distance is killing me.  I cry myself to sleep every night, and my friends are probably tired of my complaining.  I hope he still feels the same way about me--he would have asked for his ring back if he didnt', right?  Anyway, this is getting long, and I just wanted to explain where this came from...enjoy the read.
Written May 9th, 2006

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  • dark-wing-pain
    May 24, 2006
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    (HELL YEAH) i know how that feels. and it was a great peom keep it up. PEACE OUT!!!
    Ryan


  • LeBrooke
    May 16, 2006
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    I hope he calls or writes or something! I know what it feels like to be "left cold" like that- but hey, there are a ton of amazing guys out there, and if it's really impossible to be with Justin, then just find someone else to be with. I know that sounds a little harsh, but I-personally- would rather be out with whomever I please doing god-knows-what that crying myself to sleep. But if you love him that much, then hang on a little more...he's probably worth it!

    Kiss!

    ~Brooke!


  • PoeticFlame
    May 10, 2006
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    when you get your phone back, you need to give him a call then give me a call afterward. lol. Anyway, I just wanted to say thanks for the lovely message, and I hope to talk to you soon. I hope you find your phone, and I hope everything works out for you and Justin.
    Kisses


  • Uhs Feth Malorn
    May 10, 2006
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    Well, that must be awful. I would recommend that you try calling him, or maybe take a weekend and drive up. Obviously if that's not possible...but this poem is really sweet. It's very sad and I truly hope things work out for you.