Broken Hearted </3
don't try and mend it...
its too late for it....
no way its gonna heal...
from the way you make me feel
cause this pain is undescribable....
don't you see it?
when you talk to me on those days....
the hurt....the frustration...
the delays of your answers...
why can't you tell me to my face...
if you don't truly feel...
so i can rid myself of this sickness i have everyday...
and heal my soul forever
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lol. i don't come on here often.
i mostly have my life on nex.
but sigh yeah...
ill try and put up more stuffs.
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sigh thank you....and yeah no problem....
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i like it!
i think its better to know and suffer then to not know and die inside. its like everyday you wait for a saving grace and everyday if dosent come. you need some new stuff! this was like years ago! viva la canada -
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This was very deep and real. Thanks for sharing this with us. I followed your link from Lionslove. Hope that was ok.
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teehee shhhh yes...but yeah this was just another journal that my friend made me put in here....
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beautiful heart of pain..
nice, honey....needs a little tightening..but...i think this was just a quick expression of your emotion...which i understand......good thing saturday happened, huh? ..lol
love ya...............Lionslove
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i didn't write it for a poem...
but as how i was feeling with my friend.....
and people said to put it up...
but thank you.
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I loved ur poem. It was very good. Keep up the good work! Bye!
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