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Paper Doll Cut-Outs

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sun~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sun~~sun~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sun~sun~sun~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sun~~sun~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sun~




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sky

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sky




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sky 


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~cloud~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sky~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~seagull~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sky~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sky


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~we ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~oh~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~um,~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~so~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~are~oh~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~don't~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~hello,~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~if~you~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~so~happy~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~pay~any~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I'm~just~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~are~this~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~if~you~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~mind~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~a~girl~who~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~far~in~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~on~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~to~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~is~made~from~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~your~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~your~birthday~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~him~he~is~just~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`puffy~billows~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~reading~you~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~dance~on~the~wind~~~~~~~~~~~~~way~overly~abstract~~~~~~~~~~~~~~of~soft~fluff~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~will~have~found~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~you~~can~see~the~~next~~~~~~~~~~now~~let~me~tell~~you~~~~~~~~~~and~oh~so~hot~to~~~~~~~~~~~out~that~when~you~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~can~of~worms~with~~dark~~~~~~~~from~~a~boy~point~~~of~~~~~~~~~~the~touch~like~far~~~~~~~~~try~~to~read~a~~form~~~
~~~~~~~~~~and~~~moist~earth~~~~that~~~~~~~view~~~we~are~just~~~one~~~~~~~~off~~~clouds.~~~~If~~~~~~~~poem~~too~close~~you~~~
~~~~~~~~~fill~~~your~memories~~~~with~~~~~~big~~~~mess~within~~~and~~~~~~~~you~~~get~close~~~to~~~~~~may~~lose~sight~~~of~~~
~~~~~~~~~two~~years~of~several~~~tons~~~~~~if~~~~you~make~the~~~~bad~~~~~~~one~~~you~~will~~~~see~~~~the~~~~original~~~~and~~~
~~~~~~~~~of~~~~fun~and~if~that~~~isn't~~~~and~~~~utterly~painful~~~one~~~~~~~~if~~~they~~really~~~~~do~most~~~fundamental~~goal~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~enough~~~~there~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~huge~~~~error~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~feel~~~~wow~~~~~~~~~~~~in~our~~~~lives~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~will~be~~~~soda~and~~~~~~~~~~~~~~then~~~~~you'll~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I'd~~~~~say~~~~~~~~~~~~~~and~~~~~~that~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~potato~~~~~chips~for~~~~~~~~~~~~~~find~~~~~out~on~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~yes~~~~they~~~~~~~~~~~~would~~~~~be~to~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~everyone~~~~including~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~your~~~~own~that~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~are~~~~~nice~~~~~~~~~~~be~the~~~~~~ones~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~your~ancient~grandmother!~~~~~~~~~~~~boys~~~~~are~bad~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~for~~~~~~you~~~~~~~~~~holding~~~~~hands!~~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~)(
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~grass 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~),(
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~grass 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~)(,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~grass

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~boulder
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~snail

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~dirt

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~dirt

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~dirt

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~dirt

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~),(
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~grass













Author notes

this has been completely screwed up...

here is how it kind of was before it was mutilated:
http://wpbiro.globat.com/ap_poetry_backup/paper_doll_cutouts_before_mutilation_02.html
(even there it's a bit off... I have some work to do again there...)

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  • swim.x
    October 3, 2008

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    This is AWESOME!
    I love shape poetry!
    Congratulations ang good luck in the contest.
    Chin up,
    Swim.x


  • SexyAngel0418
    May 1, 2007
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    This poem is soo cute... how in the world did I miss this??? I'm going to have to see if it will copy/paste into microsoft word thought because allpoetry is blocked on the school's computer...

    Thank you for sharing this!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth

    PS I miss ya!!!


  • PerfectImperfection
    February 21, 2007

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    Great shapes and truly unique form! I like the atmosphere/scenery, so carefully placed. Great piece! Good luck to you in the contest!


  • intanglio2ring
    February 20, 2007
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    WOW!

    This was well worth the read!
    What a perfect poem to go with the shape!
    And your philosophy is true - we all should strive to be one of the ones holding hands!
    Best to you in the contest!
    Tang


  • Lyre-Bird-
    February 20, 2007

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    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!

    secondly I wish you the best of luck with your creative entry!!!!!!!


    Tracey!!!!!!!!!


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    July 15, 2006
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    Ow! This was very.......different, but in a creative way. I haven't read nor seen anything like it.


  • Forms of Me
    June 13, 2006
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    Needless to say....I am very impressed with this writing. The creativity you have expressed here is beyond some's comprehension. I really did enjoy this one and so did my daughter.


    Thanks for sharing this.
    LIZ


  • wbiro gold member
    May 16, 2006
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    yes, shiny blue, the very end of the last guy's poem is about the importance of 'holding hands' (like a string of paperdoll cutouts!), and he and the girl are actually holding hands! The first two boys are just being boys...! Thanks for commenting, too...


  • The Rubix Horse
    May 16, 2006
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    I haven't seen a poem like this in quite a long time. Very original, and the poem itself is very good. Nice job.


  • Rented Emotion
    May 16, 2006
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    this is very interesting. i love the way you seperated the poem into little children and the sky and the sun above and the snails and the grass below.. this is intriguing and i like the poem or poems.

  • Revwilliamfoos
    May 16, 2006
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    i loved this it takes time to read it also inproving your reading skills.very well done...
    love the papa


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    May 16, 2006
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    Very creative piece. loved the form and feel of this one. great write. Keep your pen forever flowing! Bunny


  • Billythekid
    May 16, 2006
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    I have never seen anything like that before. That is cool. That must have taken quite a long time to work out.
    Great job
    -Billy the Kid-


  • TheErgonomic
    May 16, 2006
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    There isn't much left to say about this - they've all beaten me to it - but I had to show my appreciation. Original and magnificent.


  • la vie boheme
    May 16, 2006
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    Most Excelltent

    This is increadibly creative, I am lacking words to describe how amazing I think this is. What a work of art. Is there relationships between the people? It's hard to tell the girls attitude towards her companions.....but I'm not sure that that is the point....maybe I am looking too close at the poem, just like it told me not to do. Again very clever.

    Thank you for sharing this unique poem.
    Blue Wallet


  • Mistressofthedark
    May 16, 2006
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    This was..."diffrent"? lol...not sure how to describe this, but I liked it a lot, it's very creative and like I said before..."diffrent" Great job!

  • wilted bliss
    May 16, 2006
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    very, very abstract! I love it, it's brilliant.


  • neoladyem
    May 16, 2006
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    Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of the most creativest poems I have ever seen in my entire life! I just love how you formed the poem into a picture like that. I have never seen anything like it. I'm stunned beyond words with this piece. You desreve every applaud you have gotten and more.


  • abc123uandme
    May 15, 2006
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    Brilliently simple.
    Thanks for a fresh read.


  • naughtyfiza
    May 15, 2006
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    wow innovative but it rally need scientist to interpret..any way thanks for shows the new horizons


  • Stevie17Marie
    May 15, 2006
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    O.o i love the way you designed this, its so pretty and fun..keep up the good work stevie


  • deadcolor dreams
    May 15, 2006
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    Holy crap.


  • Serene
    May 13, 2006
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    so snails, grass, sky, sun are more happier, so until man becomes a part of the sun, sky boulder, snail, grass and all will be whole, i do not where i got this notion that i seem to hear the chanting of we are so happy, we are so happy, but i thought the concrete form and abstract blended very masterfully, and if i may be wrong, please kick me gently, it's quite brilliant if i may sayso ...excellent piece~


  • qttjbaby
    May 13, 2006
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    umm man im sorry this pictures are cute as can be, but i just cant read this style of poetry, i havent gotten my glasses yet and my astigmitsm is messing with me hard core, but as i said before cute as can be pictures best of luck in the contest


  • Tarja
    May 13, 2006
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    You added some interesting little details that makes me like this even more now! You are such an original and talented poet. Keep up the amazing work!
    amanda

  • fragileheart
    May 13, 2006
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    this is like so clever omg lol omg omg omg its so cute the grass and boulder and the snail and the girl was like really pretty nice color too lol it was like the cutest thing i ever seen!!! lol make more of them!!! this was like a really smart idea!


  • leakypen
    May 13, 2006
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    OMG! That is amazing, i absolutely love it, it's a work of art, wow! Stunning, it took my breath away it is so CLEVER! Well done and thankyou so much for sharing it,
    Mim x


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    May 13, 2006
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    Oh Great piece! I bet that took a whole heap of work to do. Wow! Kudo Wibro! Awesome job here!


  • gothicchildren05
    May 12, 2006
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    I didn't really understand the piece but I really loved how you were able to make them all paper dolls and whatnot. That must have taken a little while to do. I think that's cool. Kinda gives me an idea but then again...I don't really know what that idea may be.


  • Night Hope gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    Very elaborate word sculpting, Poet...Interesting forms, Wayne...I enjoy seeing the different things people can do by re~arranging words & letters in an unusual manner...well done... Wanda


  • DancingRed
    May 12, 2006
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    This is amazingly insane! It would have taken so much time and talent to get it looking just right.. you have my respect!

    DancingRed.

  • Zombie Chicken
    May 12, 2006
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    hmmm very interesting, seems VERY time consuming and took alot of imagination, this is very well structured and the poems arent that bad either. good job


  • Bubble-Licious
    May 12, 2006
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    ...Wow...

    I love it! It's great, and it's so unique and creative. It's an adorable way to express the loss of sight of life...

    Great imagery...


  • -ButterflyCuts-
    May 12, 2006
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    sorry... i just had to come and say... again.. wow.. its amazing.
    sorry
    jess


  • fabio telegoriano
    May 12, 2006
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    This is basically amazing. I always thought it was weird that people would sit around making punctuated people to impress their myspace friends, but a poem within a picture is a whole new front. Very interesting, and I liked it very much.

  • Justice06
    May 12, 2006
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    Wow how amazingly you made that it was delighting to see a original poem not like the regular but as good as i see i WWOOWWW HHOOWW AALSSSOOMMEE
    Edited on May 13, 11:37 because ''.


  • x CheepPurfume
    May 12, 2006
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    OH MY OH MY OH MY! ! I reallly likedd thissss a lot. Veryy clever. hehe Great jobbb!!
    Tori


  • Kevo MF Last
    May 12, 2006
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    WOW. I say that alot when im leaving comments But I seriously mean it this time. Your form is insane. I would never be able to do soemthing liek that. I wish there was soemthing else I could give you besides an appluase to show you my appreciation for this poem. amazing splendid write that ups the par for every other poet on thsi site.


  • PoeticFlame
    May 12, 2006
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    hey great job. Extremely creative and well done.


  • Maya Lyubenova
    May 12, 2006
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    Here, it's finished now (?)


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    a very intriquing visual piece here....The challenge of constructing such intricate word art must be difficult. Very well done.
    Rory


  • Ange Dechu
    May 12, 2006
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    This had to take some patience. I like the figures but the poem itself is also kewl. Thid is unique, keep up the good work.

    -Rhiannon Rabbit


  • Ninth-Poet
    May 11, 2006
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    intriguingly interesting

    I'm truely at a lost for word! How long did it take you to write the poem and mould it into 4 sihoulettes of humans. Very creative and very thinking outside the box!
    -Keep the ink flowing!
    -Dave


  • fairyqueenwren
    May 11, 2006
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    This is so cute I just saw some one do something like this but it was a heart. I had to reread it but it was becuz the tv is on. Great job hope you do more of these.


  • solarman
    May 11, 2006
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    Amazing

    Words cannot describe how good this piece of visual poetry is. From the sun at the top to the snail at the bottom it is total perfection.

  • FindingFate
    May 11, 2006
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    What a great idea...I noticed as well that they were holding hands. You have wonderful creativity and I am very glad I clicked on this...Ty for sharing it here...Trina.


  • Zev
    May 10, 2006
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    this is good...I really loved it in black and white...I'll have to ponder whether I love it now that it's a color cartoon...but I love cartoons, so yea I still love it...


  • Tainted Innocence
    May 10, 2006
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    Incredible

    This is incredible! I love the paper doll cut-outs, but what I found to be even more amazing are the words separate from the cut-outs, the words describing the sun and the sky and the seagull, and the grass and dirt and snail! And for some reason I just love how the word 'dirt' is solitary and dark...you can't even see it until you look closely. Talk about experimentation! This is really excellent :-)


  • faeriedust-
    May 10, 2006
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    That's interesting. I tried shape poetry ones, in the form of a heart. Didn't turn out as well as this though. Truely amazing, it takes ages to get the shape completely right, which most people don't appreciate. Very cute and well done.
    Keep writing, you are talented x

    faeriedust-


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    Wow great job. Very impressive!
    You are so creative and talented.
    Way to go!
    Thank you for sharing.

    Great idea.
    Jeannie D

  • -ButterflyCuts-
    May 10, 2006
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    WOW!! the poem is amazing.. the form is amazing.. i love the snail at tthe bottm.. AP always screws it up when i try and do stuff like this.. maybe cos your a paying member it works bette.r. but wow.. serioulsy amazing..
    the words would be brilliant without the form.. so dont worry your only gettinga mazing comments because of that... but the form really adds such originality and pizzazzz!!! its so clever... especially with the litle coloured words.. and as i said.. loveing the snila
    keep it up
    jess


  • wbiro gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    thanks, I'm done reconstructing it (it got really messed up!) there are four figures...!


  • Maya Lyubenova
    May 10, 2006
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    Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Hey, the new figure appearing in the picture makes it really great! Sorry, I finished the applauses for today!


  • wbiro gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    thanks mayflower lol young! I'm wrestling with the quirks of AP's editing...!

  • Maya Lyubenova
    May 10, 2006
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    I'm glad that there are young(?) people with such a rich imagination as yours! I've always wanted to make a "picture-poem" but have never been so bold. And the cloud, the snail and dirt make the picture so real!


  • Amber Silverhair
    May 10, 2006
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    This is a fascinating poem. The use of the doll shape and what it says is well worth reading. The trouble with using this type of effect is that your message can be lost. Although in this case the dolls enhance the message.


  • DarkWithTeardrops
    May 10, 2006
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    very very cool.. and hey i did notice that they were holding hands so i guess your point was also very effective.. this was a bit of a random concept to come up with but very well done to you.. very cool idea
    =) ~toni~


  • Quill
    May 10, 2006
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  • wbiro gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    thank you all so far... now I'll tinker with it a bit... (but not too much...!)
    Edited on May 10, 2:09 because ''.


  • Zev
    May 9, 2006
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    ...WOW...

  • Sin Heart Tom
    May 9, 2006
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    FANTASTIC!!! I LOVED THIS. the idea was amazing. I had just made one out of a heart not too long ago. This was beyond anything i did *jealous* this truely is a work of art.

    Isn't it quite sad though? How often people forget that holding hands, loving, sharing, creating are all a form of affection. We look so deep into details sometimes we lose track of what was really going on. great write!

    -=Sin=-


  • ebaby
    May 9, 2006
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    awe this is great.... I love paper dolls, and you did a great job on this very creative poem.

  • kales4
    May 9, 2006
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    aww that was so adorable and u probaly took a long time to make !!!!!!!!!! i luvs it!!!!!


  • walk by faith
    May 9, 2006
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    wow i've never seen anything quite like it, but its really cute! and the part about holding hands was great! very creative!

  • natas6devi
    May 9, 2006
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    ha this is so kool


  • XxShatteredHeartxX
    May 9, 2006
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    awesomness

    haha, i love the dolls!! i would've never thought to make a poem in a format like that ever!! its so cute!! Very creative.

    XxShatteredHeartxX


  • The Angellightwolf
    May 9, 2006
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    ****

    oh this is so beautifully perfect and I just love it! Thank you for brightening my day with these cute paper dolls. Fantastic write too. The shapes are so wonderful.


  • Velvet Rose Petals
    May 9, 2006
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    that is sooo cool. Great job!!! I like the dolls. But the poems were written good too. i love it


  • VanGoghNights
    May 9, 2006
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    Nice

    Nice Concrete poem.... very good use of words... Keep up the good work!!!
    Smooches
    ~Savina~

  • it all i know
    May 9, 2006
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    sweet

    form poems rule, this one was alright, i liked the idea behind the poem, and the individual poems themselfs were neat. i liked the fact that the poems were a voice.


  • wbiro gold member
    May 9, 2006
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    thanks, gullionmar, it was, besides a huge headache, quite fun to write!


  • justcurious
    May 9, 2006
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    this has got to be one of the highest detailed form poems i have seen on here... i was stunned... and all i could think of was how hard it is to get the words and spacing right... or at least thats where i've struggled... wow. just... wow. and the poem was kinda fun... but just the ability to make those shapes with words and the poem go with it... wow.

  • SurrenderMyHeart
    May 9, 2006
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    wow this is really cool,.i used to play with paper doll cutouts lol


  • gullionmar
    May 9, 2006
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    awsome

    wonderfully written,great imagery, i loved it keep up the wonderful writing awsome idea here


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 9, 2006
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    AWESOME!

    This is so AWESOME! I have never seen anything like this before and really enjoyed it. You have quite an imagination and are very creative to come up with such a write. A joy to read and thank you for sharing it!

    Allen0826


  • James L Williams
    May 9, 2006
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    very well written

    I really enjoyed this poem. The style is very awesome. Very Well written.


  • Summer Dawn
    May 9, 2006
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    this is so extremely coool. yeah, the picture can be very distracting from the poem. you should know this is a poetic piece of art


  • Coral
    May 9, 2006
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    omg I never would have thought to do something like this in a million years. That is so cute! You are so talented! Well done.


  • Theroseislovely
    May 9, 2006
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    Wow, now I can admit I have never seen anything like this before. That was pure genius. Great poems/poem. LOL, this is too cute!!


  • Sin Aesthetic
    May 9, 2006
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    Omg that is so cool

    wow lol


  • MissCassie
    May 9, 2006
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    Haha yeah holding hands is awesome? lol. Nice write Uncle dude.
    Cass

  • Tarja
    May 9, 2006
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    I believe they call this... a concrete poem, ya?
    Well I liked it. Made me smile and not just beacause of the little people! lol, but it's just so simple and unique. I love it! Wonderful job!
    amanda


  • lavender shadows
    May 9, 2006
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    Yes, I saw that as you were posting and deleting them. lol!

  • wbiro gold member
    May 9, 2006
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    Thanks, oh secret inspirational source! This may be my last 'form poem'- the working title of this piece was 'Form Poem Headache Take 15' lol!


  • lavender shadows
    May 9, 2006
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    even better now


  • lavender shadows
    May 9, 2006
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    I wish I had your mind! This is absolutely fantabulous!

    your lavender daughter

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