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© Emotions (Quatrain)

The deepest human emotions
allows our unique love first,
to quench the desires
rather than the thirst!

 Copyright ©  2006  Robert L. Huntsman

Author notes

Quatrain - A poem, unit or stanza of four lines of verse, usually with a rhyme scheme of abab or its variant, xbyb. It is the most common stanzaic form.

Written May 9th, 2006

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  • DumbBaby
    March 4
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    That was quite perfect. Desires always come first...

  • johnh94
    June 7, 2006
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    Robert, thank you for showing it so plainly! I do not want my thirst slaked, I want to come away thirsting for more! Then again, I'm obsessive that way! Joy to read poet. Thanks for sharing it with us! John


  • itllnever
    May 20, 2006
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    Thank you for that great review. Yes, it was said the THIS was NOT a poem as have a few of my other QUATRAINS. Well, I guess I was in the wrong contest.


  • Leance
    May 20, 2006
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    This is quite lovely and extremely truthful........
    It is sad that this was removed from the contest you apparently had posted it in........Everyone has a different interpretation of what "poetry and poems" are or are not.....
    I would consider this poetry.......
    Leance


  • itllnever
    May 17, 2006
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    Thank you for the great review!


  • itllnever
    May 17, 2006
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    Thank you for the great review.


  • gingerfer
    May 17, 2006
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    I hope you win the contest. that was a great poem


  • EyeRaven
    May 14, 2006
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    wow,
    at first i was like,
    is that all,
    but once again i believe that,
    the most true words are laid concise
    breif but powerful and well-put

    sir i am in delight to learn from u

  • itllnever
    May 11, 2006
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    OH, but my dear LovesLostMemory, this IS a poem! But maybe I am just not the one for your contest.
    Edited on May 11, 8:39 because 'edit'.


  • Sweet Lullabies
    May 10, 2006
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    I'm sorry but this is not a poem persay. I am going to have to remove this from the contest. Feel free to enter a different one if you wish. I hope all is well. Sorry about the inconvenience.
    LovesLostMemory


  • ScarletO gold member
    May 9, 2006
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    Hey, I'll drink to that!! LOL Love desires somehow need quenching before the thirst or is it that the thirst to be loved is stronger? You and these quatrains always make me think too much.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    May 9, 2006
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    very true, love the romantic version of this, thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest..
    Linda


  • itllnever
    May 9, 2006
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    Thank you my dear!

  • Ir.muse
    May 9, 2006
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    Wish you luck in the contest.

    Shahrzad

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