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Entice

I've rumbled through
the veils looking for
another seduction to
call my own

Here, lithe-less upon
this mind, another verbal
command wrapped alongside
blissful pleasures of the
night

Ardent literature playing
havoc upon my wanton body...
                                  and all could be done was to sigh

These eyes gaze outwardly
for the secretive touch only
you can provide; provocative lingerings
set in place for another onslaught
of that honored caress...
                                 for now, I'll whisper with the shadows

Author notes

Art: Running Wolves
Artist: Danny Hahlbohm

Note: Think of how your fantasy can simply entice your lower regions without thought but then only figure out how that sensation still lingers as your mind keeps thinking about that dream
Written May 9th, 2006

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  • Ephiphany
    December 26, 2007

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    Indeed this is very sexy & Seductive

    Loved the imagery in this piece, very intriguing.
    Thanks for sharing, I appreciat this.

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