A lovely little bird
Singing in a tree
Flew to visit me.
I swept away
With a hay...
Broom.
The dirt on the ground,
An excuse to be where I want
How clear the day
A cat came along
Meowling a song
Scratching for a scritch
Of her ear.
Again the broom
Served me well
Away went the cat
That was that.
Bees buzzed by
So I had to run.
Grabbed a horse that could fly
With its thousand eyes
We flew and flew away.
Castle's in the sky
Mold before my eye
Into rabbits, dragons
And things unknown.
Sun streaming down,
A warm pleasant death
Little suns on the ground
Beam, unwanted weeds.
Shun the Spring
Shun the fun
Never done days
Breaking Winter
Nights of stars
And eveninged flowers
All's still beautiful
All beautifully still.
What a day
What a night
What a world!
Author notes
Y'know, I wasn't really going anywhere with this, just some nonsense off the top of my head. It's not s'ppose to rhyme or have a particular rhthym, it just is what it is.
Reflection of a positive mood and a nice spring day I guess.
Written May 9th, 2006
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Compulsively amusing little ditty. Seemed to have a smile in each line.
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This is the Joy of Life...why we are here
This is really fun piece to read. You exhibited you thoughts in a simple, but fun way of the joy of life -
well if this is a good mood and a nice spring day then bravo for you!!
but your right it did not really go anywhere and did not have a good flow however as for the content it was lighthearted and enjoyable 
thanks for sharing this sweet write that kind of takes you away 
huggles
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i can relate to all the sunshine in this as that's how spring is going so far in my part of the world
sometimes writing down random thoughts turn into a poem. ya just never know
nicely done
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VERY BEAUTIFUL CALMING POEM ,ABOUT GODS NATURE, IT'S ALWAYS GOOD TO WRITE ABOUT DIFFERENT TYPES OF SITUATIONS IN LIFE, MAKES POETRY MORE FUNNY. I REALLY ENJOYED THIS, THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING!!
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Like you said this was something just off the top of your head..it was cute..very original...could not completely know where you were going. but tried to follow...like you say it is what it is...thanks for sharing.
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This is an interesting and different peice of literature. I had a little trouble following it, but I understood it a little better after I reread it several times. -
this is very cute for children
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this is quite a reflection. I love whne you mention
Sun streaming down,
A warm pleasant death
Little suns on the ground
Beam, unwanted weeds.
I myself have recently been contemplating dandelions and working them into a poem. Good job. I really liked this piece.
Arielle Giselle -
very very interesting write, I must say you have a different style but I like the reflective attitude and it has very humurous imagery in it. good job overall.
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~shirley
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