Oh dearest one,
these words that i speak to you show not but the truth,
the ever vastness of the gentle waves of your smiles
whisking over me they fill me with life.
oh my love for you, it stands
and in that moment there is a rush,
with my arms wrapped around you
my hands resting upon your abs.
a breath of your words whispering,
that sacred love unto mine ears.
A KICK! alas
how sweet the feeling knowing you bear whats mine and ours!
oh the aching in mine heart when told we were not to be.
though king and queen do not wish us one. but us...
the prince and princess of distant land doth speak unto each other...
our love unknown to others who might spite us and say we do not belong.
oh my sweet
how time doth slow down when I'm with you.
your radiance it covers me like an endless glow amounting from thy moon
heh, these words some might feel are empty.
quick words just to tempt the body and soul into thinking it is love.
some might say to forget me. NIGH I SAY
do not forget me though some may say we are not meant to be...
hope... yes... hope is all we need. and through the fires of hell we shall walk miraculously showing all that they cannot smite our love.
oh radiant one these words i speak to you are the truth and in this time i tell you
you are the one for me and when the new life begins all shall be well
life itself has been given unto us as a gift. as a sign that we a re meant to be
oh sorrow at the words "you'll never see her again"
though through all the hardships we hath faced!
NEVER... NEVER I SAY... shall we fall under this pressure. for love ...
oh sweet love that hath fallen upon us as cupid striking us with his bow... our love shall prevail. and though this our little one will be as free as the wind when laid upon us.
oh sweet... believe me when i say that you...
truly are... the only one that can ever... gracefully pull me out of sadness... and in these final words realize once and for all
now and forever i will all ways love thee
signed in love,
written in madness,
Daimen perry
aahhh...
those words spoke dear unto thine heart...
love always spoken but never truly known till now...
hah i laugh at thosaed who say they know but know not becouse!...
they themselves hath not had the chance to reveal themselves in whole unto one to beautiful as though art now...
this feeling...
what is it you ask...
an aching in my heart for you it takes all that has happend to us and when im with you...
it all melts away.
some would say i am mad.
mad... yes... madly in love
for love is not an erotic position awaiting entry by an esteemed sword
but love truly is feeling that nothing can go wrong...
at least not when im with you.
for you see when im with you... im free
free from all the torment and pain of life
all i have to do is see your face or hear your voice and all...
allmy pain is struck away
when you can have that feeling in one moment and it last a life time then
that... yes that... truly is love...
oh agony at being away from you... yes
but love none the less
Author notes
i revised it some for this contst i hope you like the extension
Written May 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- Tell Me About Love by Sad-and-Lonely.
350 points, ended May 10, 2006, 18 entries
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this peom is very intereresting
lorrie i know you mean well but me and steph are talking now and were doing alot better. truthfully i think you should worry more bout the fact that your thinking about leaving micheal for some guy you dont even know, rather then worry about mine and stephanies problems thats why steph doesnt talk to you that much anymore is becouse your actingchildish and when she tried to tell you what was goping on and about how she was worried about a miscarraige... you blew her off saying youve allready had too so you didnt wanna hear it and that is very very wrong my freind i love you like a sis cuz your stephs sis but before you make remarks lean the whole story ok and try to see what your doing wrong too ok ill chat with you later lorrie ok so i guess ill see you around bye bye -
I'm leaving a comment. I don't know exactly what's going on between you two Daimen, but I do know that if you just restrain yourself from trying so hard to talk to her or keep in touch with her or any of that and just let her come to you,,,,,,,if she does love you and want you to be a part of that child's life than she will come to you. Quit pressuring her and junk and she'll come to you. You ever heard that saying "if you love something, let it go. If it comes back that's when you'll know" Well that's what you should do. Just a word of friendly advice becuase I've got my own crap to deal with right this minute. Love you though. Hope to finally meet you when I come up in August.
Lorrie -
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