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16 And Dead

I'm driving down the road. I'm obeying the speed limit and all other traffic laws. I get to the mall and I'm fine, I have ten hours to kill before I have to be home. My curfew is 11:00. Not bad, mom trusts me, finally.

I shop for hours! My feet hurt and I'm ready to leave, it is only 9:30 and it will take and hour to get home, so I leave.

Once again, I'm driving. I'm obeying all the traffic laws, then suddenly, out of no where comes a drunk driver. I try to swerve to miss him but he swerves too. We hit head on and I'm rolling down the hill. The drunk driver flew through his windshield, i saw him, but my seat belt kept me from flying through mine.

I don't remember much after that. All I remember is noise, bright lights and a lot of wind! I couldn't make anyones face out but I know there were people there. I'm so scared! I can't see, all I know is I'm in bed and my whole body hurts! I can't even move! There is something in my throat too! It hurts so bad! Can't you take it out?

Mom, Dad, I here you and you're not fighting, you're crying. I here David, Zach, Jerry, Ben, and Kelsey too! Why can't I wake up, or even move? I don't want to hear you cry! Grandma, Grandpa, why is everyone so sad? Casey, I hear you! I want you to know that I love you no matter what happens, but the words won't come out! I've never seen you cry before! Why are you crying?

Now I hear a strange voice, he says that it's to late! What is he talking about? Oh no! I'm moving! Where are they taking me? I'm so scared! Why won't anyone answer me? Is the doctor telling the truth? He says that my time of death is April 28, 2007, 3:04 am. He can't be right! I'm only 16, I have years to live! I have to get married and have kids and get old before i die!



Then...

I wake up...

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I really had this dream and I was wondering what you thought!
Written May 9th, 2006

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  • lovin-casey
    May 10, 2006
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    Thanks! I think this is a wierd dream! I just hope it doesn't come true!! Thanks again!


  • Penz gold member
    May 9, 2006
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    weird dream huh? those kind of dreams can get make you pee you're pants in real life.

    Nice work here. You did well translating you're dream to writing.