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Hell fire1

She played around with tarots card
Did you them in hell
She said yes~
Why Did she say yes
I don't know why
You say bye
I say hi
Then I don't know why
Hell fire
Is evil!
The end

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She played around with tarot cards!
Written May 9th, 2006

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  • Iana
    August 12, 2006
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    fair

    You've gotten yourself all worked up over a set of cards. The only magic that would come to you is if you made it yourself. Remember that we make our own heaven and we make our own hell. I hope that you have a happy day.